Date: March 28 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic description of Graham's fear and plight. Great writing.
Very curious to see what may happen to Graham in the future.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent writing and wonderful concept. I am looking forward to reading more.
minuss
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Now, that's my kind of explanatory flashback! Short and to the point (unlike the ones I do; lol!).
Seriously, though; it sounds like Graham is developing extreme claustrophobia. It's probably not more than an hour or two, at most, since Liz went to class after leaving him in the drawer! But, claustrophobia can make one think it's been much longer.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome setup. This story is starting to pick up the pace beautifully. Wonder if it's Sharon at the door? An I wonder if there will be some weed/pot smoking in this story
At any rate great story an I'm really looking forward to what happens next.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is great. I really hope that you continue cause these characters are finaminal.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: March 25 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I enjoy your writing and look forward to seeing this continue! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! That really means a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
A very nice start to the story. I'm curious to see where we go from here.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!