Reviews For Toy Town
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Reviewer: Shrunken Guy Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Shrinking

Well detailed. However, there should be interaction between James and his tiny town.

Reviewer: lil_panda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2006 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Shrinking

This is an awesome beginning to what im sure will be an amazing story once its finished, theres not one part of the story i dislike, and the way you write is genious, plz plz finish this one!!

Author's Response: Cool. I've never had anyone appreciate my writing so much. This is actually the first story I've ever posted anywhere.

Reviewer: king2006_1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2006 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Shrinking

thanks

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2006 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister

nice one! the different point of views, the toy town setting and the writing itself , all this make a really good story. Please continue!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2006 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister

Well done.
A very good story with some interesting theme.
Telling it from different perspectives, with lots of description of the experiences, engages the reader and makes things seem more real.

Author's Response: Thanks, I just took all of the things I'd seen in various stories that I had liked, put my own spin on them...and came up with this.

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