[Report This]Date: March 18 2019 8:12 AM Title: The Beginning
kevin durant shoes
burberry
nike lebron
nike air vapormax flyknit
mk handbags
nike vapormax
goyard tote
ed hardy clothing
kate spade handbags
pandora jewelry
jordan shoes
harden shoes
balenciaga bags
nike air max 90
skechers shoes
balenciaga shoes men
louboutin
ralph lauren
yeezy boost 350 v2
kyire 4
ecco shoes
goyard bag
air max 90
moncler coat
ralph lauren shirts
lebron 14
jordan 11 retro
north face jacket
Hermes Belts
yeezy boost 350
air max 95
nike air max 90
air max 90
mulberry bag
kate spade purses
supreme jacket
celine
moncler jacket
nike air max
nike air max 270 women
adidas superstar
adidas yeezy
red bottom shoes
louboutin shoes
moncler jacket mens
jordan shoes
kyrie irving
salomon skis
pandora jewelry
valentino heels
salomon boots
nike air max 97
coach
birkenstock
curry 4 shoes
north face jacket
jordan retro
chrome hearts
didas ultra boost
nike air max 97
burberry purses
fitflop sandals
prada purse
nike air max 2018
adidas originals nmd
nike air max 270
kate spade handbags
ralph lauren
pandora rings
ray ban eyeglasses
fitflop
prada purse
air jordan
yeezy boost 350
mbt shoes
oakley
nike air huarache
ultra boost
true religion jeans men
pandora charms
stephen curry
pandora rings
pandora jewelry official site
supreme clothing
coach outlet
nike kd
mont blanc sale
jimmy choo heels
ultra boost mens
cartier glasses
fitflop sale
christian louboutin
birkenstock shoes
pandora jewelry official site
nike air max 2018
asics running shoes
barbour wax jacket
mcm handbags
rihanna puma shoes
Salomon Shoes
mk handbags
moncler coat
moncler sale
salvatore ferragamo
pandora jewelry
nike air max 95
fitflops clearance
burberry handbags
ultra boost
salvatore ferragamo
Pandora Jewelry
salomon speedcross 4
moncler
nike air max 270
Yeezy Boost 350
chrome hearts pendant
kevin durant shoes
nike air max
under armour
asics shoes
bvlgari ring
nike air max 90
chrome hearts
hermes
longchamp
pandora charms
true religion jeans men
huaraches
adidas originals nmd
lacoste polo shirts
ray ban eyeglasses
air jordan
nike air vapormax flyknit
air max 97 gold
longchamp le pliage
mcm backpack
ralph lauren
Date: October 13 2015 12:16 AM Title: A "Big" Catch
So was the door closed or not? They ring the doorbell which means the door is closed and yet they just walk in as if there is no door there. This story is getting odd.
Date: October 13 2015 12:13 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
Kierin has some odd dreams. I know I should feel sorry for the people, but most of them are evil anyway. The robbers definately deserve what Kierin may have in store for them.
Date: October 13 2015 12:10 AM Title: Right Place at the Right Time
So surely they will get arrested now. Anyone watching the security footage will see them. If not aressted then killed by the police as they are clearly too dangerous. I would not have become involved in the robbery and quite whilst I was ahead.
Date: October 13 2015 12:06 AM Title: Back Alley Dealings
Well at least they're only shrinking 'nasty' people I suppose. But at this rate it'll only be a matter of time before they are caught, surely. Someone or a camera will see them shrink a person. Al it'll take is one mistake.
Date: October 13 2015 12:03 AM Title: The First to Go
Or maybe he didn't want to save your life because he knew you were sleeping with another person?
Date: October 12 2015 11:54 PM Title: The Beginning
You have a curious premise. Normally it's the female who does the shrink. I like the paradox of it being the submissive person being in control of the shrinking.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 2:30 PM Title: Sacrifices must be made
Wow...
Date: January 27 2013 6:33 PM Title: Sacrifices must be made
Great story, it is hard to believe this is your first one. Hope you write more in the future. You have a great talent.
Date: July 10 2012 8:29 PM Title: The Beginning
Please post more of this story. This story is to good not to finish.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2012 9:16 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
This chapter is great, but mega giantess is not my stuff, 500 feet tall is the larger I like for a giantess.
Author's Response:
I very rarely like mega Giantess stuff as well so there wont be much of that
[Report This]Date: April 20 2012 9:08 AM Title: Back Alley Dealings
I start to love Kierin!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do!
[Report This]Date: April 20 2012 9:07 AM Title: The First to Go
Going better, but I wish she crush people barefoot.
Author's Response:
I'm going to have more! I promise!
[Report This]Date: April 20 2012 9:07 AM Title: The Beginning
Nice start!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: April 19 2012 9:46 PM Title: The Beginning
Very good. However I prefer barefoot crushes rather than crushes with shoes on. That's just me.
Author's Response:
I plan on trying to get both in the story! I love boot/converse as well as bare foot crushes.
Date: April 14 2012 12:34 AM Title: The Beginning
This is fucking amazing. Thank you, thank you for putting this up. I keep reading this again and again. I'm looking forward to seeing more by you in the future. You've got talent.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: March 18 2012 3:56 PM Title: The First to Go
You're very strong on dialogue. I like that you can create genuine conversations and that each of the characters sound consistent. Try not to form sentences with complicated, winding structure--just state what happens. If a sentence runs too long, think about breaking it up into two or three.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yea i've noticed i have that problem.....
Date: March 15 2012 6:48 PM Title: The Beginning
This is one hot piece of story! I can't stop reading this.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: March 06 2012 10:30 PM Title: The Beginning
Well, there's one thing you have not done and its worked out well for you. You didn't describe how your main characters looked. Giving us an easy way to put well, whoever we want into the story. Furthermore, your writing style gives us a great overveiw of what is happening and in my eyes the plot is something that can rival some of the bigger writers that are on this site. All in all. A bloody brilliant story :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I've always liked stories where you could picture the characters however you want. In these kinds of stories, i find it very satisfying!