Date: February 11 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Having Ella placing her foot in was Awesome. Her toes crushing his genitalia and everything else. Your description was fabulous. He knew the incredible difference between Mrs. Stevens toes and Ella's. Their relationship will never be the same.
Author's Response:
Always nice to get reviews on older stories. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: February 11 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Loved your description as her foot leaves the shoe. The initial burst and then it leaves. The description of what it's like to be battling her big toe for an hour. It made me feel like I was there. The long shower to try to get the smell out. An awesome idea. I would think the smell would be all up inside you. I don't think a shower would wash it away. Really loving this.
Date: February 11 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4: Heeling a Son
Such a cool chapter.
Date: February 11 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins
Love how slowly and calmly she places him in her shoe. You describe the inside of her shoe very well. He climbs but with a simple tilt, in he goes. This is fantastic.
Date: February 11 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2: Little Child of Mine
Love Judy,Mrs. Stevens. She's so calm. She's going to punish him for his own good. Love how she picks him up and holds him. Love his fear.
Date: February 11 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Very cool. This looks great.
Date: October 12 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Your stories are always amaizing, hope you keep writing.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: Little Child of Mine
Ack, forgot to do a review. Five stars of course!
Date: August 14 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Incredibly gripping story. Was practically impossible to put it down once I started reading it. Just in the way that you described the actions and emotions of the characters. Was really easy to imagine that the events were unfolding right before your eyes. Which of course made the ending all the more powerful. With the realization that Scott's mother wasn't the only person in the world who would take pleasure in his humiliating nightmare. :)
Can't wait to see more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate the review.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I loved your take on this old but classic tale--momdom and a tiny son. You did great and it was just the right length. I'd love to see the mom eventually sweat her son away down the line, but you once again used awesome descriptions to how deeply inferior the son was to his Mother's mature, pungent feet. He really was broken by her and I liked how she went about destroying her son's self-worth in a very nurruring, motherly fashion!
[Report This]Date: January 21 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
It is a very go idea for a story, and well written. Good work!
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
love this story. glad that his loving girlfriend got to experience it.
an loved the fact that her feet smelled wonderfully.
hope to see more stories like this in the future from you.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 20 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins
great story so far. love his mom toe nail color, as well as ella's reaction to the whole thing. on to chapter 4
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 20 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
A well written story, too bad it's not a little longer! IMO, I'd work on Freshman.
Author's Response:
thanks for the reviews man. i will at some point revisit these people just for fun, since the story is so short
Date: January 20 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Great story. Well, all of your storys are great :)
I'd love to see the Blackmail one continue, or a new story based on a teenager slowly shrinking.
I feel that with your writing, and slowly building up events, along with creating the perfect characters; you'd create the best slowly shrinking story ever!!
You're the best!!
Author's Response:
an interesting idea... although at the rate i'm writing, i doubt a new story will show up for a loooong time. :P thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Date: January 19 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Sad to see this story end =[. As for your next story, i would like to see the continuation of Jack and Carlys story =].
Date: January 19 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I'm sad to see it end, a wonderful story sir!
-Jake
Date: January 19 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 4: Heeling a Son
your stories have been awesome in the past. this one will be no different, i am sure.
excellent chapter jack.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: Heeling a Son
I seriously just hit my head against my keyboard for 15 minutes to remember my password and review this. (To be fair, I frequently forget my password for this site.)
Excellent stuff. Excellent build, excellent cliffhanger. I can't tell if Judy is going to shrink Ella or if Ella is going to try Scott on for size. Either way, I want to read more. Hope you continue.
Date: January 18 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
yes! yes! yessssss! ella too!? AWESOME!!!
-Jake