Date: January 18 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Ooo this is going to be epic! In so many ways. I'll be watching for the next chapter for sure. Wonder what shoes/sandals are and nail color... If its pink....... BTW love ur storys, never read much but I'm hooked.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 4: Heeling a Son
You really seem to know what you're going for with this one, I can appreciate that. And I'm enjoying the heck out of the story so far. I can see it going one of two ways, and I'm eager to see if I'm right in guessing.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins
Oh, I'm aware of your reluctance to have your "hero's" lives end at the feet (insert body part) of their tormentresses. That said, I imagine this story will be fairly short, as it seems rather straight-forward in scope. If you have the son live, I love to see him ruined emotionally from his mother's feet. But, hey, you know my by now to know I like these things to begin all sunny and fun, only to end on a dark note! Thank for the great read so far.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I really like the how vulnerable you protray the son, son tny, naked, and totally demoraize, all before even being subjected to his mom's monstroussly pungent feet! While the mother seems kind and loving, with a hint of a cruel, punishing streak, I have a feeling her feet might be too much this time for her son. Here's to hopeing that things get carried away, and don't end nicely for the time-out son!
Author's Response:
hehe well as you've probably noticed in my past stories i'm not at all a fan of killing my protagonists. i think you'll still enjoy the ending though, which will be posted soon
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
:O AWESOME CHAPTER! I am LOVING this story!!! *Thumbs up
-Jake
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Best set up for a story I have probably seen yet. Love the tension too. I like the mothers feet and toes already....any plans to shrink the gf too? hehe I have more questions but might spoil it :P
Author's Response:
you'll get your questions answered soon enough once i post the remaining chapters, thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Ah man, that's humiliating! Great chapter....
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you enjoyed it
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins
This is an extremely well-written chapter. It's not often that I have to consult a dictionary while reading a fetish story (i.e., "sudor"). Very well done, my friend! I am very anxious to read more, and can't wait to see Ella's ultimate reaction to what she has witnessed. Thanks for continuing it.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, glad you liked it; i like trying to mix up the vocab to keep it all from getting stale with the same words over and over
Date: January 17 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
The wait is killing me... Keep going!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
oh man, I CANNOT wait to find out what time out means!
-Jake
Date: January 16 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
awesome start, can't wait for more!
-Jake
[Report This]Date: January 16 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Cool premise! I like where this is going. I'll keep an eye out for updates.