Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

You spelt cheeks like checks.

This has a very interesting beginning to the story. Keep it up! =)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well it's weird how Ted randomly appears in someone’s garden after pressing the button. The M.U.T. seems a bit outlandish. Surely the government would help him to develop such groundbreaking technology and anyone who is smart enough to do that should be embraced by the government. I don't understand how he could create such a thing on his own and be able to miniaturize it. Teleportation would require masses of computing power to be able to move the subject from one area to another as it need to remember to put everything about the teleported subject back in the correct places.

And for him to be able to travel to another universe that would require him to go faster than the speed of light to be able to be there in an instant, if indeed he has gone to another universe, and teleportation would use signals to transfer information from one place to the other which wouldn't necessarily travel faster than light. In fact I don't thing anything on the Electromagnetic spectrum can travel fast enough to enable someone to instantly go into another universe.

I hope somebody comes to rescue Ted. Samantha is a cunt. :(