Date: January 17 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 3 - At home
Love the way she keep teasing 'tiny' Joe with her size and strength. :) Megan almost made me faint at the end of the chapter too! lol More please!
Date: January 12 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Megan is quite a crazy character. And also, you know you can just leave a response to my review and I get an e-mail about it. Do you know how how to do this? Oh and I trust you are going to add speech marks soon, right?
Author's Response:
Seeing as how evryone likes speech marks... Now featuring speech marks :D
Date: January 11 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Thanks for the comments, errors noted... and there will pobably be even more of them following. Rereading is such a pain :) so thank you..
I'm off to post chapter 2
Date: January 10 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Great story! :) I'm so happy to find a new female muscle story in here, they are somewhat rare. The way Megan acts very proud of her size and strength is very sexy, especially when comparing and talking about how he is so small, weak and light he is to her. Please, post more!! Can't wait to see what happen next...
Date: January 10 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Sorry for submiting my review more than once. I notice the spacing went a bit too wide when I copied it into giantessword.
Your story is good and I am really enjoying it so far. There aren't many spelling or grammar mistakes (except for no speech marks!!!!! sorry, needed emphasis. I'm finding trouble telling speech apart from his thoughts in some places) although I did notice a few things. I hope you don't mind me pointing out these errors. If you don't want me to then I won't in future.
The management and tailors worked normal 8-16, and 16-21 was only for pick-up or placing orders and getting measured.
I assume those are working hours but I'm not exactly sure they are relevant and they just make the paragraph more wordy. Also here:
This was where I got in, My job was to spend
You seem to start a new sentence and yet you have a comma.
Here.. and she extends one massiv hand
Needs an E on the end.
And here:
so tiny next to my arm... How much do you weight..
weigh.
As I came to pick over
I think you mean peek.
her breast were.. beyond big
Breasts.
and above it her lovely face.. see anything you like tiny..
And here, he's thinking and then she suddenly says something but it's not on a separate line or even separated by speech marks.
And again here:
. to have you mind.. blown.. for me seeing her stature