Reviews For Liam's Rift
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 03 2022 5:43 AM Title: The New World

Promising start and a novel concept girlfood.

I can't help wondering if perhaps this is the same Jessica that Liam met originally and the alternate/parallel universe is simply the future; perhaps Jessica even created the shrinking device for men after some man (Liam?) pissed her off. In a similar vein, perhaps Deanna is grown large and is persuaded to join the giantesses and therefore, a potential danger to the guys. That's probably where my devious mind would take things. :)

Reviewer: IsabelChris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2019 2:18 AM Title: The New World

Hey, what a story! So thrilling!! So bad it's not finished up yet... maybe someday, or somewhere, we can get that very good piece of vore story complete :)

To think about it, it must have been very strange to Liam to start a very interesting relationship with Jessica and, later, see her again, just to almost end his life in her stomach! I can say he got to know her way more deeply... hahah!

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2012 10:16 AM Title: The New World

Mud should be dressed in blue. yes, navy blue from head to toe, rather drab exept for his patent leather shoes.

 

I like where this story is going. Wouldn't the clothes the tinies are wearing cause the giantesses to ask questions or are the men at the "farm" clothed?

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 3:56 AM Title: The Rescue Team

Methinks a real Deanna must have made quite a giant impression.

Good detail and variety in this story.



Author's Response:

thanks timescribe. i have to start working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Hollow Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 22 2012 12:36 PM Title: The New World

this is a great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Hollow. Glad you like it. Stay tuned because more will come eventually.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 7:37 AM Title: The New World

This is Sliders vore style, in a way that can re-use the character and have him eaten again and again. 

Best idea I've seen here (and first story I've really gotten into) for ages.



Author's Response:

Thanks timescribe. Not sure our hero wants to be eaten again but he may not be able to avoid it when he mounts a rescue.

Reviewer: amanda Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 8:51 AM Title: The New World

Wow this sexy hehe i do like your stories girlfood,i can't wait to read some more chapters.

 

Amanda xx



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy it so far Amanda. Welcome back.

Reviewer: womenfood Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 6:43 PM Title: The New World

wow~ wonderful story! I love all of your stories, and welcome back. :) Hope see your new stories soon.



Author's Response:

thanks, more soon.

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 1:27 PM Title: The New World

the first sentence had me laughing! I like where this is going. It's good to see you writing again.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I pretty much just repeated the title didn't I? Good getting a review from you man. I have been enjoying your stories too!

Reviewer: nostromo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 12:18 PM Title: The New World

Excellent start, girlfood! I like that you have multiple points of view, too.  Looking forward to read more chapters :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you Nostormo, and it is good to see you back on the site. I'll probably add a few more perspectives including some of the giantesses. Any suggestions you have are welcome!

Reviewer: Krauser Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 11:36 AM Title: The New World

I really like this concept! It's great to see another story from you and I really can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what will happen to tuppy? Will liam be able to convince the girls hes from a different universe? 

Guess I'll wait and see. When do you think you will have the next chapter up?



Author's Response:

Thank you Krauser. It is good to be writing again. I'm sure things will be interesting for Liam and Tuppy but guys tend to have a poor record of survival in my stories. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can. If I can't finish tomorrow it will most likely take a few weeks. I apologize for the delay. As soon as I can....

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