Date: January 13 2012 8:48 PM Title: My story
nice chapter! your definetely improving, I can tell, there seems to be quite a bit more detail now, keep it up!
-Jake
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 13 2012 2:43 AM Title: A night to remember
Great chapter. I'm not really in to shit though. That part was a little gross.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm sorry about that part. I forgot that not everyone is into the sort of stuff. From now on, I'll put those bits in bold or italics so you can skip them.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2012 4:06 PM Title: My story
Your prose seems to have improved a bit for this chapter, despite the lack of spell checking, and the spelling wasn't too bad regardless. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Like I said, I didn't have time to spell check today. I might go over the chapter tommorrow but I'll see how I feel. Glad your enjoying the story so far.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2011 5:03 PM Title: The shocking truth
Liked this chapter quite a bit, having the mother getting a bit crazy and growing is a nice touch.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2011 4:48 PM Title: Mom's secret
Very good chapter. I loved the Butt scene.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: December 26 2011 4:11 PM Title: My story
I definetely like the idea of his growing mother, although his relationship with his sister is still a bit unbelievable and a little to sudden in my opinion, but I do like the longer conversations he's strating to have.
-Jake
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I see what you mean about the sudden relationship. I might edit the earlier chapters and add clues that they're both into each other later on.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2011 7:08 PM Title: Spending the night with Becky
Amazing keep it coming.
Rhino
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: December 22 2011 6:28 PM Title: The shocking truth
I like the story but I personaly don't like people enslaving the tiny people and forceing them, but it is not my story just my opinion
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm sorry you feel that way :(
[Report This]Date: December 22 2011 2:45 AM Title: Spending the night with Becky
A very erotic abd very hood chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: December 21 2011 10:32 AM Title: Spending the night with Becky
Awesome story! I dont know what ur planning next but it would be cool if becky because a lil more sadistic and takes advantage of him. I like the butt parts and this lastest chapter alot =) I wanna hear about becky stuffing him in her butt =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was planning on keeping Becky a gentle giantess and make the mother the sadistic one but nothing's for certain yet so we'll see what happens ;)
[Report This]Date: December 21 2011 5:38 AM Title: My story
WOW! Best story I've seen in a while. 11 out of 10! I love the gentle side of mother/sister but erotic at the same time. Can't wait to read more hope u have lots more to this story cause its shaping up to be a classic. Thx and good job!
Rhino
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I've just added a new chapter so enjoy!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 10:02 PM Title: Uncontrollable urges
I really like the story. I agree I would like to see more of Becky in the story.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 3:26 PM Title: My story
I am enjoying this story. I always love butt and feet related work, both aware and unaware, so having all of that is right up my alley. Hopefully our tiny hero ends up permanently in one of those two places! :-)
Keep it up, my friend!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 10:01 AM Title: Going to work with mommy
story is turning out great. keep it up. love that fact that they are gentle with him an nice to him/ when they know hes there.
aaron
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 12:08 AM Title: Going to work with mommy
I like it so far! I guess my advice would be to expand on things more, to give it a bit more depth. The readers will really appreciate it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will try to do that in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2011 3:48 PM Title: My story
more boob/butt stuff, its good so far it needs a little more banter though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The newest chapter contains a bit of butt. But I see what you mean. I started the story off slow to give you a good understanding of the characters and their personalities.
Date: December 19 2011 1:09 PM Title: My story
Now this was quite an enjoyable read. I agree with you in that giantess stories involving the family are woefully linear in how they tend to deal with inter-character relations, and I quite like what you've done with it so far. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you like the story so far and will try to keep you entertained.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2011 10:18 AM Title: In moms shoe
would like to read more. this is very interesting
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will try to post a chapter as soon as possible.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2011 2:20 PM Title: The shrinking continues
So far so good
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll post a new chapter soon.