I loved the cruelty of Carly making Jack pay for someone else's crimes against her. The last thing you had her do in this chapter was truly vicious. I loved it.

Dave

Great story. Well crafted. I love your detailed descriptions of what is going through her mind. She's psychotic and crazy enough to do anything to Jack - the messier and sexier, the better...

im happy u decided to continue with this great series i hope u r gonna write some stories about actions in school like promoton night or some parties and carl will take jake with her. it would be interesting to imagine it. Anyway great job. Jurdzi

i love this series.

Hey, it's great to see you back here! You're a prolific producer of oustanding material. No one can go at the pace you were going indefinitely. And, if anyone deserves to take a break or even reitre, it's you.  That said, I completely agree with this in-between, short story approach.  It's much more manageable and allows you to devle immediately into a scene without having to produce the necessary characterization and scenery, so to speak.  I loved getting a glimpse into Carly's head.  I've left a few stories unfinished and probably will never get around to finishing them.  My honest advice would be to stream-line A Little Blackmail 3 and go with the ending you had orignally planned.  I wish I had done this with a story of mine years ago, called, "Daddy's Fatal Attracton."  If you don't think you'll ever finish the third and final chapter of this brother/sister epic, could you say how you planned to end it?  Take care and do what you feel like doing. We are always happy to see anything you write.