[Report This]Date: October 31 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel
In Carly we love, honor and obey.
Though for being the big bad here you kind of feel for her a bit. Nice job painting Brad as sleezoid.
thanks for the review. my goal with this 4th story is definitely to at least let people feel things from Carly's side, if not sympathize a bit despite her craziness
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[Report This]Date: August 05 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
This was a very good chapter. Carly is delightfully evil, and I do think there are people capable of doing this type of thing in the world, if given the chance.
thanks for the review! despite how the story can be unrealistic, i try to retain that Carly sees her actions as justified and not truly evil to reflect some kind of lifelike sibling relationship as much as possible
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[Report This]Date: August 02 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
This is a very good chapter. The Carly and Jack stories are my favorite. Since we Know what happens at the end of the series. I hope you keep this story running for a long time.
I have one question. Will we ever get an update on how Carly is and how she's punished?
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will get around to the spinoff story, and I actually already have a couple notes typed out for it. Eventually, yes.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
I've always kind of envisioned a scenario/scene like this in my mind.
The tiny trapped helpless in a sock or shoe inches away from something/anything mentioning the disappearance only to be taunted by the realization of it all.
Bravo, I'm giving this a 10 rating.
Author's Response: thanks! It's definitely one of my favorite general scenarios and this seemed the perfect place to use it
Date: July 25 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
Very good writing, as always, from you Jack. I very much enjoy all of your stories and hope you continue to produce more in the future.
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Hotbox with a Goddess
This was a fantastic chapter. I loved it.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 15 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 6: Hotbox with a Goddess
I like these additions. sadly it makes me want more from the main story
Author's Response:
someday i will continue the main story. thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: Hotbox with a Goddess
Fantastic entry! Very creative. Your best stories always heavily play up the psychological aspects of their characters.
Author's Response:
i appreciate the review. i enjoy trying to focus on those kinds of elements
[Report This]Date: July 14 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Hotbox with a Goddess
I'm going to miss her when her final tail is told.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear it. Thank you for reviewing sir.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 6: Hotbox with a Goddess
Need more chapters like these. Glad to see an update to this series again.
Author's Response:
Haha I shall do my best to make more then
Date: June 14 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5: Drunk on Power
Ahhh, one of my favorite characters ever :) Sad reminder however, of the downfall of Carly *sigh*. Thanks for giving us a taste of the good old days!
Author's Response:
haha, calling it the "old days" sounds funny when you consider that i really only started on this series about a year ago; thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 5: Drunk on Power
CARLY!!!
Thamk you for returning this story and this lady to our field of vision good sir, also even if I know how it all turns out life really sucked for Jack.
I look forward to seeing how you finish this story arc.
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thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I love the Blackmail stories. These are my favorite stories on the site. Glad you are still continuing them.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks; i've enjoyed writing it a lot, and i appreciate the continued reviews from people who like reading it
[Report This]Date: February 15 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I have read and enjoyed all in Jack's series. The way you described Jack's interaction with carlys hands and mouth was quite vivid. As a hopeful romantic, I found Carly to be a cruel and unworthy goddess. If this was your intent, you were successful.
Author's Response:
that was definitely the intent ;) glad you've enjoyed the stories
[Report This]Date: January 24 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Should We Play?
seriously, the "A Little Blackmail" series should be nominated for some kind of award. Your stories have been some of the best written this past year. Cant wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
haha, well thanks very much. i think i'd settle for being featured, though, rather than the pulitzer ;)
Date: January 24 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Should We Play?
wau really great chapter, im glad u ve returned back to this story in such a short time after the last one u published. I love it primarly just for a combination of feet mouth play and jakes neverending bothering, so far my the most favorite GM story, hope to see more from u. do u have any other already written stories u still didnt published?
Jurdzi
Author's Response:
glad you liked the chapter. i do happen to have a couple more unpublished stories, but they represent my earlier attempts and i'm not terribly pleased with them. if there's enough interest though i guess at some point i might tweak and post them
[Report This]Date: January 24 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I've read and loved all of your "Blackmail" stories, but after reading you latest chapter I figured it was time I made an account and wrote a review. I'm a huge fan of Ugg boots and rather disappointed that Jack didn't get to see the inside of them! I hope that one of your future chapters will also feature them, and maybe some more sock play as well!
Again though, I love your writing and hope you continue! Thanks for the great stories!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, and i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories. sock play i'm sure will make a comeback at some point, as i happen to be a big fan of that. as for the Uggs, i'd have to find a way to make it interesting to write, but i'll definitely consider having a chapter at some point delve into that.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I lloved this chapter. I always love when his in her mouth. But I keeo thinking while she' drifted off in her hsid like she does sometime that Carly could accidentally swallow jack...LOL
Author's Response:
probably a very good concern to have... jack does happen to be a bit over two inches tall, so he may be a little large to swallow accidentally, but if carly focused, she could probably "do the deed" with relative ease
Date: January 23 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Should We Play?
WELCOME BACK!
Well I know you've been back with another story but this is more for you and this story.
Good job sir.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Underfoot Homework Helper
Oh I love when she pikes on the humiliation like this. Ever think of having her kiss her ass? Just wondering, Because that could be very humiliating too.
Dave
Author's Response:
i'm sure it would be, but i don't much like the butt subgenre, so the odds of seeing that aren't great