[Report This]Date: February 18 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)
CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRLLLY!
Author's Response:
Bonanza!
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I don't know why, but I always wonder how Sophie would react if Jack told her what Carly did with him at his funeral.
Just a thought lingering around my head.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing/rating. that's actually an idea i plan to address in the eventual 5th story.
Date: February 15 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister
Outstanding chapter! Great idea too, it's totally logical Carly would be into 50ft Woman. I've missed Carly.
Movie night with Carly. Maybe next time she'll give him a choice. You want to sit in my sock drawer or watch ISM or HISTK?
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister
Great chapter. I've been hoping for a new chapter. Thanks.
Dave
Author's Response:
sure thing, thanks for reading/reviewing
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister
How I've missed Ms. Carly.
Author's Response:
:) thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I've skimed over some of your tales and they are simply the best, 'discriptive', and visually surreal. I try not to really absorb, your work 'Too-much'(Ha) because when I'm in the process of writing myself, I don't want to inadvertantly 'use' any of your Ideas.
But, I just had to let you know that your storie's are simply the BEST!
Author's Response:
thank you much, i'm glad you enjoy these tales. i often have situations like that where i'll read a great giantess story and feel inspired by an idea, and then i have to be careful to keep my own interpretation separate from others' work, haha
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I had been reading your stories as a guest for a while and now that im registered I want to let you know that your stories are the BEST on this site.
your use of descriptive language is perfect, and your ability to create a realistic giantess has never ceased to amaze me.
10/10 this entire series was just epic
Author's Response:
thanks very much, i'm glad you enjoy the stories
[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Attack of the Fifty Foot Sister
It's funny, after I read one of these, I go straight back to chapter 31 of the third story and go,
"heh, if only Carly knew what's coming towards her."
But anyway, another great chapter as usual.
Author's Response:
i actually chuckled aloud when i read that you do that. i suppose i've done my job then? thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
This chapter totally makes me think of Handsome Jack and his city Opportunity.
Relatedly: Yaaay! These chapters are really fun.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: December 21 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
By the way, how old are they in this chapter?
Author's Response:
thanks for reading! in this chapter, unless i'm mistaken, Carly is 17 and Jack is 20.
Date: December 21 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I did the same thing Afroking did, after reading this chapter, I had to see Carly's fate at the end of ALB 3! An amazing chapter nontheless, something I have come to expect from you. :)
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I miss Carly! Definitely one of my favorite characters. Would love to see her end up coming out on top but after seeing your response to someone else, I don't think that is your plan :)
Another great chapter, thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! one thing i will note, though, is that my response was intended to mean Carly was beaten at the end of the 3rd story. once I post the sequel to that, anything is fair game again, so who knows?
Date: December 19 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
i think you should start a new story with the kind of situation she was talking about. Kinda restart with a brother sister combo and instead of just him shrinking, have all men shrink and the world become like Carlys dream.
Author's Response:
i have a few ideas for a story like that that i intend to write up at some point
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
after reading carly splat all this bullshit about herself I just had to read the final chs on blackmail 3 just to remember that she finally got what was coming to her. Best way to end the story between a goddess and her bug brother.
By the way are u going to write a story about Jack and his new transition in to peace with Sophie and his family? and what ever happened to the fallen "goddess" Carly? If your not working on anything Im sure everyone would like more from Jack.
Thx for writing. got to bow to the king
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i often feel the only way i can justify putting Jack through all this is that the ending eventually is happy. i will eventually publish the next installment of this series showing where Jack, Carly, and Sophie have all ended up in the time after the 3rd story, and in fact i do have a small bit of it already written. thanks again for reading
Date: December 19 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
Tiny sister would have been great but a tiny brother seemed to give more dominance and more psychological.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
*bows to El Presidentris Carly*
Honestly it was either going to be her or Julia with the delusions of being some great insperational being. Carly just just kind of fit given that she while not as well forceful as Julia kind of relishes in the view of being superior to those around her.
Though part of me wonders how she would feel if it was a tiny sister she was torturing and not Jack.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. she and Julia are pretty similar in their aspirations, despite Carly resorting a little more to mental torture than physical like Julia. and I'm sure her delusions would be tripped up a little if she had a tiny sister rather than a brother
Date: November 23 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
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[Report This]Date: November 04 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel
Great chapter. Pkease continue the series. I would love to know what happens to Carly and Jack after you ended it in the third Story.
Dave
Author's Response:
the 5th story will indeed appear at some point. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: November 02 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel
I really like this 4th story. It is so good to read and be able to get back into this universe even after it was finished.
I am still anxious for the spin-off showing what became of Carly, hope you decide to work on it someday. Can't help but to feel sorry for her since I like her. Hah Don't know why most people hate her so much. :(
Sometimes I wonder how it would be if Sophie didn't appeared and both of them continued to live together, now being a bit different (maybe just a bit haha) from the usual torture since Carly understood her feelings towards his little brother.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. the 5th story will happen at some point, i have the beginnings of it already written actually
[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I really love how Carly likes to play and mess around with Jack but she makes sure that Jack is safe with her.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing