Date: November 23 2015 9:00 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
I wish you would continue these stories maybe make Kristan the one incharge of all the shruken people again. At 1 in she sould be able to fit them all inside of her now.
Date: December 12 2014 12:30 AM Title: Doctor Small and the Kangaroo Court
Love the story. The early part with Kate when he is small and not tiny was well done. The scene when Sophia first finds the little house was chilling. Fantastic real life story. Loved the test tube idea. Looking forward to more,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 1:47 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Love it!!
Date: November 17 2012 4:07 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Read this story again. An was wondering if there is going to be anymore updates?
aaron
Date: February 26 2012 4:56 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Lol I just realized That I misplaced I letter.. It's 'Game of Thrones'
It's fictional series about knights kings an junk light that. Very good because of the acting an scenery although there is alot of backstabbing that happens(hints the title, I guess) which I don't really care for but it keeps me hooked an wanting to know more.
An u watched 'green lantern on syfy channel.. Its nothing like the garbage movie that recently came out I hope..
I'll have to check it out.
aaron
Author's Response: Oops, I suppose it was the garbage film. Understand I am severely behind on proper cinema critique training. I just saw my 1st 3d and when did popcorn become more expensive than lobster?
[Report This]Date: February 25 2012 7:25 PM Title: Doctor Small and the Kangaroo Court
Chapter was great. An I loved the meeting of the little women Ha! An the whole him eavesdropping was genius. So glad that you put that in there, an I thought it was hilarious that the tiny females immediately tattled on him. Glad that his punishment was very light-hearted. Cant wait to see what happens next. Hope it'll be a sophia heavy chapter.
Also, the part where he fell in her new bra on the windowseal an her crying reaction was inspired. I'm so glad to see that she actually cares for him, an it makes sense that the 'mommies' would claim his assets his house, money, etc.
An when you said jealousy I figured it was with one of the goddesses. Never in a million years would have thought it would have been his tiny friend. Very cool.
aaron
Ps I'm watching 'game of thornes' HBO on demand. Very good show. IMO.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review, aaron. When I finished Chapter 3, I had brainwaved this chapter much different than what was posted. Sophia received a second chance to share love with her former husband. With his macho pride crushed and evaporated, she could at last become the center of his psychological universe. This chapter turned out to be fun writing once I set sail. The final chapter will also be heavy on fun and passion filled.
Ps "game of thornes sounds interesting. I just finally watched "The Green Latern", which was also a very good sci fi, with a leading lady extemely fine, indeed. However, I do not support an ending which leaves the viewer 100 percent certain of a pending sequel. The obession with future riches is poison to the creative process.
Date: January 08 2012 4:16 PM Title: How to Cross Your X
great story
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and for the review. I have much of the final chapter brainwaved, to be about 15,000 more words, perhaps. It will include a bit of adventure, twists, and a bunch of romance. I am finishing up my other work, Ranger Joe, right now.
Date: December 15 2011 8:16 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
glad your writing again, I really like this story. I was just hoping you can add a sceene where both people are actualy all the way in side the giantess and are discribing living in her or what is it like inside her while giving her pleasure. I world be very gratefull if you did that. Please keep wirting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the glowing review, Slacker28. Writing my new story has been enjoyable, and gets the brain cells humming in harmony. Thank your thoughts on how to create a romantic scene with a vivid description to bring it to life.
Date: December 13 2011 6:03 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Marcus is quite a bit more fortunate then most shrunken people considering the giantesses he's been around so far. I'm a little curious what would have happened if Marcus had been one of the shrinkies that hates being inserted.
Author's Response: Marcus is a man who loves women, but will resist vengeful insertion strenuosly and great futility!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 7:11 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
pps are you planning an epilogue for 'ranger joe's tiny adventures'? cause that story was remarkable. an id love to read more of it.
aaron
Author's Response: I broke my promise long ago to continue Ranger Joe's Adventures but will catch up with him soon. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2011 9:41 PM Title: Sweet Dreams, Chapter 2
wow. this story is spectacular. was hoping that we see sophia and marcus interact. an glad there is another little woman as well. its so sexy how the pheromones of the giant women affected the tinies. an glad to hear that you have another massive chapter planned an i cant wait.
aaron
ps love all the fooy rubs an what not. this story is awesome. an as far as pure writing goes you rank right up there with cayce. in my opinion.
Author's Response: Dr. Small has not seen the last of his former bride. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2011 3:28 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Most impressive. Reminds me of how some stories were wrote when I first found the GTS community years back.
Author's Response:
Thanks, MKU. I am far from infallible in my writing skills, but if I choose to post a story, I want it to be understood. I do not want to leave the reader frustrated and confused. In other words, I am long-winded!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2011 10:08 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
awesome story. an great to see you back.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron. Writing a story such as "A Small Step for Mankind" allows my fertile imagination to run wild in the vast universe of verse. I am glad others can enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it. A story like this takes me 50-75 man hours, including all the corrections and tweaking, so it is an investment. Not all stories posted here appeal to me personally, but it is interesting to see others' ideas. Also, it is great when we can make a good connection with each others perceptions. See, the writing mode makes me more cerebral than I should be for normal daily life!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2011 10:13 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
This is a very nicely done story. I certainly hope that sequal chapters will follow.
Author's Response:
Thanks, DrCreep. I have the rest of the plot brainwaved, and will work to get it posted in the next 10 days. I fixed a few minor grammer errors in 1st chapter. The 2nd posting should be close to the same length as the 1st Chapter.