[Report This]Date: November 21 2021 10:35 AM Title: Skye and Stacy
skye is so cool
[Report This]Date: November 21 2021 10:34 AM Title: Consequences
great!
will you continue this story?
[Report This]Date: November 21 2021 7:31 AM Title: Vengeful Goddesses
this is a really hot story. every episode is intense!
do you know any other story that is similar to this one?
(brobdingnagian and lilliputian, destruction, crush)
thank you
Date: October 07 2014 2:38 PM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
I'm a huge fan of the Jonathan Swift Universe (if you couldn't tell by my writings). I have visited this story on many occasions because there are some scenes and scenarios that I find--not only fascinating--but incredibly hot. My beef with the story is that you gloss over details and move on to other actions too quickly. My advice would be to slow down. You know the old writing adage, “show, don’t tell”. In this story, you are telling me what is happening. You are telling me what the characters are saying. And you are telling me what the character’s inclinations are outright.
Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving this story and eager to read more. I’m just offering some advice to make it even better. Please continue the story whenever you get a chance!
By the way, have you seen my interactive story that takes place in the same universe? I tried sending you a PM, but this site is so fucking broken, ugh.
Date: October 03 2014 10:27 PM Title: The Cheerleader
no more giant pls only gts
Author's Response:
I am not into giants, only giantesses. I assume you are referencing the male players. I only intend to breifly write about the males and plan to only keep it high level like I did in this chapter. If I decide for one of the Brobdingnagan females to have sex with a Brobdingnagan male, it will only be at a very high level and not very descriptive, except to compare them to a Human/Lilliputian.
Date: October 02 2014 6:50 PM Title: The Cheerleader
This is where I always get frustrated with these types of stories. 'Shew wouldn't be convicted of murder' so instead of doing the right thing and potentially saving herself a lot worse legal trouble by covering it up, she more or less sells the wife into slavery?
I mean really, that's just silly, and surely an investigation could easily find out that Samantha was the last person with them.
So frustrating.
Author's Response:
You are correct and to be honest the thought never crossed my mind to have Samantha release Taylor. I do think that someone like Samantha would not exactly being thinking rationally in this case though.
Date: September 29 2014 1:43 PM Title: Mountains
but u didnt tell how tall she is~
Author's Response:
I don't know what you are referencing when you say I did not say how tall she is. If it is about the main characters (Skye and Jessie), I have purposely left it vague for the reader to imagine. Both Skye and Jessie are many miles tall when compared to any Lilliputian. In fact any Brobdignagan is miles tall.
Date: November 14 2013 1:54 AM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
Love this story!!! You are an awesome writer! Please keep the story going!!!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2013 6:51 PM Title: Mountains
Love the story but chapter 3&4 are missing. I only read to chapter 2 but I was hoping to continue reading after chapter 2. Can you please put them back up.
Author's Response:
This has been fixed.
Date: December 31 2011 5:40 AM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
Interesting developments. If that size supremacist party ever manages to come to power they would find a great Quisling in Stacy. She could be propped up as a puppet ruler over the Liliputians and order them to do the bidding of the Brobdingnagans. Of course, she would be a slave herself, but she would have it cushier than the rest.
What could Liliputians do as slaves? I guess they could be useful in the semiconducter industry for obvious reasons. But you know what would be really cool? Imagine if Jessie or Skye ordered them to build an entire city inside of her bra or panties. Then she could literally wear an entire city against her most delicate parts. You wrote in a previous chapter that the Liliputians are notorious breeders, so imagine all it might take is a sample of a few hundred and then within a few months they could multiple into a few million. The way that could work is if they reached maturity within a very short period of time. They could have the same lifespan as humans or Brobs, but let's say they go from infants to adults in like a day or something like that, so that way within a day they could breed and create a new batch or something.
I dunno... I'm just brainstorming. Keep up the good work. I'm sorry that your recent chapters didn't get any feedback. Being that it is/was the holidays that probably had a lot to do with it. Hope it doesn't discourage you from writing more.
Date: December 07 2011 12:52 AM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
Great to see a story with micro/mega or giga action. Stuff like that is extremely rare, yet it is probably my most favorite.
Now as for criticism, you say the Lilliputians are dust motes in comparsion to the Brobdignagians? If that's the case I found it odd that Jessie could pick up Stacy's clothing even with tweezers and then blow them dry. That was a total jumping the shark moment right there. Especially when you've wrote how Jessie and Skye blew entire cities into oblivion. Just seems weird.
I would have liked to see more horror and shock from Stacy over the wanton genocide committed against her people when Jessie spontaneously destroyed the city of Eagle Lake. I know it is Stacy's fetish and all, but this city was her home and these were people she knew. Plus you'd think something like that would make her feel less safe now that she is being held captive basically by someone who had just murdered so many. I also found it strange the Lilliputians on her breasts would start fucking each other while they and their species were being exterminated. I know there are tons of GTS stories that are like that, but I don't think its very realistic and my enjoyment is effected as a result because it makes it harder for me to believe it.
But really all in all its a great story, and I'd say better than 90% of what I read on here so I hope you will continue and would like to see what happens next.
Date: November 28 2011 11:46 PM Title: Jessie's and Stacy's First Night
Interesting turn of events, can't wait to see where it goes =)
[Report This]Date: November 27 2011 2:05 AM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
Great story.
But there could have been a little more from the people perspective in the city in chapter 5. Mostly because I like the doomed thoughts of the ones that are going to be crushed.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2011 10:00 PM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
Very good story so far. I liked that you got to the action with Skye and Stacy soon and are currently setting up the relationship with Jessie and Stacy. I look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2011 9:36 PM Title: Brobdignagans & Lilliputians Online Dating
great story. i will be reading more if you choose to post although the mega/micro isnt my thing i really enjoyed reading this tale.
aaron