Date: July 30 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this was good. I loved it! It got me aroused, mad, and even made me cry with tears of joy and sadness (Then again it may be just because I am having mood swings [Stupid hormones] But I think it is a bit of both hormones and how good it was) A good story especially near the end (Yes, I know it seems like it is only man gets shrunk et cetera, but later on in the... Wait this is only one chapter? Wow. but it gets good.) I hope this is a good review ( The reason why I hope so is because I am doing this on a Nintendo 2ds and because it is my very first review, actually the very first thing I am doing with my account on the entire site).
Date: June 02 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
awsome story would love to see it completed
Date: January 04 2009 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely a true masterpiece. One of the first stories I read when i discovered this type of fiction. And still one the very bests. Highly recommanded!!
Date: July 19 2008 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
The lack of comments here can best be explained by the hundreds of lurkers who refuse to become public in expressing interest in an unaware story.
Date: June 30 2006 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
The sine qua non of the unaware genre; one of the top five macrophile stories, period. An absolute must-read.