[Report This]Date: December 24 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Persuasion
I would say the answer is "Yes."
In the meantime...
"Have yourself a Merry Little Xmas."
[Report This]Date: December 22 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Persuasion
I was excited to see that you added another chapter, and you have pleased me again! The bonding gong on between Emily and Jim was touching, I can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: December 21 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Persuasion
love the emotion. great job. wonder where fran is though?
aaron
Author's Response:
We shall find that out in a couple chapters.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A World of Larges and Minors
I must admit, this is the first story I read here, so I wasn't expecting much, but I was hooked after the first few chapters of the story. Your character developement is very good, especially with revealing Abby's past, explaining why she is gentle and kind. Abby I feel is a sweet character; she is my favourite. I liked the descriptive language you used when Fran was making Jim worship her feet, I personally don't like feet but I liked it nontheless. With Jim being "stolen: by the cheerleader is an interesting concept and the little ride he had in her breasts was good. I await to see if Abby finds Jim. Well done ang keep up to good work!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Double Injuries
I shall make like an Air Force ground crewman and vote for: "Contact!"
;-D
[Report This]Date: December 19 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Double Injuries
that awesome that hes thinking of her well being eventhough hes in so much pain himself. great chracter development as well. cant wait to see where you take it from here.
aaron
[Report This]Date: December 19 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Reaching the Practice Zone
finally caught up with this story lol. an its great. cant wait to see what happens to fran an jim? an with abby unconscious how will she find jim? an what about jims wife?
aaron
[Report This]Date: December 18 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Reaching the Practice Zone
A better question would be: will Our Little Hero change his name to Jim Nast?
[Report This]Date: December 17 2011 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - From Pom-Pom to "Pom-Pom"
Whoa! Yet, more refreshing realism. I mean, as a rule, the generic little guy in these stories is miraculously indestructible. Sort of like a 1980's horror film-slasher! But, this story is quickly turning into a brilliantly-written exception to the rule.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Making a Plan
story is turning out great. keep it up.
aaron
[Report This]Date: December 14 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Making a Plan
I didn't expect this kind of interlude. Touching and brilliant, at the same time!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Unaware Trade-Off
How will he fare? He'll probably get a "raw-raw" deal!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Fran's Desire for Honesty
Whoa! Fran seems to have more issues than the news stand at Grand Central Station!!
Date: December 11 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Submitting to Fran
Excellent! Let none intervene and have her play with him! ;)
[Report This]Date: December 10 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Bumpy Ride & Foot Admiration
By seeing how long they are in meters?
;-D
Seriously, though: I am privileged to be the first reviewer of this new chapter. And, this is the most plausible rendition of the motion sickness that can be inadvertently caused by a giantess, carrying a regular person, that I've seen depicted in any of the stories here, in a long time.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it so much. I wanted his ride with Fran to be much rougher than with Abby, and getting sick is really the first thing that came to my mind. Glad you thought it was done well.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Meeting Fran
one can only wonder what fran has planned...
aaron
Date: December 03 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Meeting Fran
By the way: is there any chance of Jim being shown off to the LMU cheerleaders? I'd love to read his reaction to the sight of their...giant pom-poms. ;-)
Author's Response:
To be perfectly honest, I had not even thought of something like that. A very interesting idea, though!
Also, sorry there was no update on the story yesterday. Have a busy weekend planned and I want to finish up the other two stories before continuing this one. I'll have a new chapter today or tomorrow.
Date: December 01 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Meeting Fran
More fun than he'd have with a black wife-beater ("Can you say, 'O.J. Simpson?' ").
[Sorry. Just trying to illustrate my Giantess City point.]
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah. It's alright, and I do see that point. I'll try to be careful with the wording of descriptions from now on.
Date: November 30 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate
I'm not sure why she would say this:
I know you're going to be an important person to me at some point.
How could she know this already, after only just meeting him?
Author's Response:
Well, call it intuition. I wanted to flesh out some backstory for Abby, but I didn't really want the "Narrator" to tell the reader, moreso than it being told by one of the characters.
I figure it as a situation, where you get a feeling about someone or something and you just 'know' (or at least think you do) that they are going to make an impact on your life. Sort of like when you're looking at an upcoming movie, game, album, or something else that as soon as you look into it, it automatically clicks as "I'm going to love this".
Date: November 30 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Taken For A Walk
I've still got almost plenty
I noticed that line and it doesn't make sense because you should get with of the almost; that's all.