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Date: April 28 2012 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Silent Reactions

I vote for...something else. Nudge-nudge! Wink-wink!

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Date: April 28 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 47 - The Truth is Forced Out

I'm now off to the next brilliant chapter.

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Date: April 05 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 47 - The Truth is Forced Out

Hmm great chapter. Can't wait to see what happes with Abby an Ruby.

aaron

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Date: March 31 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 46 - What is a Giant Hugger?

Well; seeing how compassionate and gracious Abby has been, so far, she'll probably pity Ruby more than anything else. But, non-"Giant Huggers," like her, would probably become twice as angry about Larges if they were told. Especially, by a Large!

Sorry, if I over-analyzed this chapter. I tend to get long-winded, like that, with well-written stories.

Author's Response:

You are over-analyzing nothing.  I enjoy these interesting bits of feedback you have about where I might be taking it.  I'd be lying if I said I never took anything you've suggested into the story that I hadn't thought of before.

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story so much.

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Date: March 28 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Abby's Curiosity and Impulses

Cue the opening bars of the DRAGNET theme.

"Boom! Boom-BOOM-boom! Boom-boom-boom-boom-BOOOOOOOOOOOOM!"

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Date: March 24 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Argument Goes Physical

Uh-oh! This does not bode well, at all.

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Date: March 21 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 43 – Wife and Nurse, a Battle of Wills

P.S.---that should read "saga." Where's an embarrassment icon when you need one?

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Date: March 21 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 43 – Wife and Nurse, a Battle of Wills

Well, if I were Sarah, I'd get an air rifle and tranq-dart the beeyotch! Aside from that, I applaud you for adding a new chapter to this sage, and for continuing to do so in a most delightfully plausible manner.

I also thank you for letting me be the first to review this chapter. ;-D

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Date: March 01 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Brief Amnesia and Visitor Arrival

Oh, botheration! Ruby's just the type to take the fun out of "dysfunctional."

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Date: March 01 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Brief Amnesia and Visitor Arrival

Ruby seems to be so... angry for her size. Scary. D: I hope everything goes well for the large ones, better not mention Fran!

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Date: February 03 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A World of Larges and Minors

I only got 3 words for Sarah and Abbie: you better hiiiiiiide!

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Date: February 02 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Sarah's Hanging Wake-Up Call

Well, I sincerely hope his not-so-little misadventure with Fran won't make him as vindictively anti-Large as Ruby.

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Date: February 02 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Sarah's Hanging Wake-Up Call

Great story, an I love the direction it's headed.

Aaron

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Date: February 01 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Turning From Bad to Worse

Whoa! The AL's are so threateningly well-organized that they _already_ have police moles in their ranks?

Awesome!! :-D

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Date: January 31 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Patching Up Two Patients

Only you can answer that last question, LK. But, I can tell you one thing, for sure. You've temporarily made me breathe easier, depicting Jim as not being critically hurt. :-)

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Date: January 30 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Concerns and Nurses

Good questions, all!

This was truly a breath-taking installment. In fact, I had to re-read it, because I was initially alarmed at the mental image of a giantess nurse trying to inject Little Jim with an over-sized hypo!!

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Date: January 17 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Heading Back to Campus

Awwwwww... cuteness to the max in this chapter! I love it! I think my heart actually stopped when Jim asked Abby to stay with him; excellent chapter, excellent story and overall excellent author!

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Date: January 15 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Heading Back to Campus

great chapter. wonder in jakes wife will be informed that he was injuried. an i hope the cheerleader jake helped will visit him. but not fran cause its been way to soon.

aaron
ps but i do want fran to try to do any an everything jake wants to get on his good side.

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Date: January 15 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Heading Back to Campus

Cue Dionne Warwick @ Company:

"THAT'S WHAT FRIENDS ARE FOOOOOOOOOR!"

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Date: January 15 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Rescue Operation Part 2

Way to go, Abby!!!

:-D

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