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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Abby's Proposition

Abby seems so nice. I'm sure Jim will enjoy his new job.

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Date: November 30 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Radio Debate

They could ultimate lead crime

I think ultimately.

And also, if bullets can't penetrate them, then why are large people not in charge? Surely if they are that powerful they don't need to feel discriminated as they can attack without much worry. I'm just curious is all, but I have a feeling this will turn out to be a good story.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Ruby's Racism and Jim's Opportunity

I hope Jim will be alright in his new job. Ruby doesn't seem like a very nice person thought. Perhaps he will leave her later on for a larger person?

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A World of Larges and Minors

The summary doesn't do the story justice. Reading this chapter makes the story sound much more appealing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends and Fate

Hoo-boy! Not just a rural terrorist "militia." But, active in the city, too? This really doesn't bode well if these lunatics are as well-organized as I suddenly have a bad feeling they are.

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Date: November 28 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 - University of Kindness

Only the next brilliant chapter will answer that semi-rhetorical question. ;-)

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Date: November 28 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate

I wonder how she'll feel when she learns Jim lied by omission?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate

this is very interesting.. i mean selective amnesia a very genius idea. great pace to the chapter as well. wonder if abby an ruby met before? or why ruby has such disdain for the larger people?
anyways, this story is great an hope that there is much more to come.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Taken For A Walk

great chapter. cant wait to see what they have to tell each other.

aaron

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Radio Debate

I'm looking forward to this story! Please keep on going.

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