[Report This]Date: November 29 2011 3:36 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Uh-oh…if she gets mad here, that date may never happen…
Fantastic story, by the way.
Date: November 27 2011 3:23 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I have a feeling Jack will be getting lucky tommorow night
-Jake
Date: November 27 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 21: Relationship Woes
Ooh…will he start getting a little more personal with her on this date? :D
[Report This]Date: November 26 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 20: Quality Time
yep its official. i dont care for julia's bi-polar behavior.
but this story is rather entertaining. hope that there will be a little more to it.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 26 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 20: Quality Time
I'll bet it concerns a performance at Carnality Hall. ;-D
[Report This]Date: November 25 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 19: Chat with Julia
Something tells me Jack is about to go where only leprechaun-shrunken nerds have gone before.*
* "Getting Lucky" reference. ;-)
[Report This]Date: November 24 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: Little Taste
holy shit.. that was an intense chapter. well done. wonder what will happen now? will julia cancel 'school' indefinately? even if not, there has to be some sort of punishment for making julia look powerless.. but i hope not i hope this makes her like/love jack all the more for 'standing up' to her..
aaron
ps are you adding new chapters to this or are they still the ones that have been already written?
Author's Response:
these are still the already written ones. once we reach the end of what i already have, there will probably be a break in this story for a while
[Report This]Date: November 24 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sweat Sock Hop
Chapter 10: Sweat sock hop
That was very well done! I'm a bit jealous of Jack, and even Brian, despite their potentially permanent predicament! This story is excellent.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18: Little Taste
Wow!
:-O
Date: November 23 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown
I've been meaning to comment on this story.. I really have been enjoying it. pitch black erotic dominaiton. you've gone and created another legendary psychopath!
Three stories at once, you're amazing, Jack.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown
Great job on the last few chapters. You did a good job handling the juxtaposition between Julia's absolute physical supremacy and her immaturity/emotional vulnerability. Them having to participate in her terrible art made me laugh. I started to feel sorry for her a little bit until she started being a bitch to Gina again.
I really didn't see this last bit coming, though. I mean, I get that Jack started to feel safe and all but goddamn is he pushing it. :)
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown
i know id be scared shitless. lol
great build up.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown
Whoa! I never would've predicted this not-so-little plot twist.
THANKS for GIVING us such a brilliant new chapter, so promptly. ;-)
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 16: Trained Birds
Uh-oh! Can you say "back-fire?"
Date: November 21 2011 8:41 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I honestly don't know if I could stand up to julia like that, Jack's got some serious manhood.
-Jake
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 15: Breakfast at Julia's
Ah, yes! The proverbial Plan B. And, for Brian's sake, I hope it's a good one!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 14: Stroking Her Ego
You might say he's putting on the performance of his life. Let's hope he can keep it up!
The performance, I mean.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Breakfast at Julia's
love the fact that anna is going through all the pregnant symptoms. its going to be very hard for julia to punish her now, hopefully. i just hope shes not mad at her or brian. but i cant wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Date: November 20 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 14: Stroking Her Ego
Gah, this is REALLY good. It's odd, I haven't really seen this scenario played out before in GTS. Good tension. I feel like Julia's just a really awkward person, so she has no idea how to respond to Jack's "affections". Really interesting.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 14: Stroking Her Ego
great updates. thought that this was going to be a short one or two chapter thing but its quite long. an im really glad that you decided to post it on here.
aaron