Date: August 29 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Brilliant crush/ vore scene. It doesn't get much more dramatic than watching a psychotic who's imprisioned you torture and destroy a family member.
Julia is too good at this game. The way I see it, her only challenge is controling her own actions. Unless the maid or better yet, her mom, were to accidentally see into her private life. Their disapearance may be very difficult for her to explain.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Act 3. I really can't imagine how she'll treat her captives if, until now, had been humane treatment.
With Jack and Julia's newly established intimacy I do hope she decides to discuss and explore her fetish with him.
Excellent work! Quite the legendary psychotic you've created, once again. :)
Author's Response:
Acts 1 and 2 will be cakewalks compared to what Julia has in store for them in 3
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
10/10. Good work.
Author's Response:
thanks much
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Dude all of your work on this site is amazing. I love all of your stories and this one is just amazing. Please keep going
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Never mind Dee Snyder. Julia is the _real_ twisted sister, here!
Author's Response:
admittedly, though, Julia's musical talent isn't quite as up to code
Date: August 20 2012 10:35 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Please, make a good ending for Julia, only this time. I have read other works of you and from other people that are very alrge, and they always end with the big girl defeated, shrunk down, or whatever. Like In your writing A little blackmail, please this time only make a good ending for the giantess, I know it's very hard, but please, i'm begging you ^^.
PD: If you can add more X chapters (If you know what I mean), I will be very grateful xD
Author's Response:
we'll just have to wait and see. there will definitely be more X chapters though
Date: August 20 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
It's amusing how each person has a different idea of what an abusive situation is when dealing with a giantess. If it wasn't for Julia being psychotic and well underage I would find being trapped in her panties while she enjoyed them to be rather pleasant. Brian on the other hand will most likely be sickened by it both on a physical level and knowing what she's done. After all he didn't like how her cum tasted in the least.
Julia seems to have some serious mental issues especially given how her mood changes. That and I notice a lack of parents in her life. While I do not believe it excuses what she's done and I would prefer to see her suffer a horrible death I can't help but believe she's a deeply troubled person. Perhaps while her parents have provided for her they really haven't nurtured her? She may be a bit starved for affection and this is the only way she could think of to get it. That or suffered some kind of trauma in the past. Once thing seems certain though. If Brian blows his cover they're all going to die.
Perhaps Brian should take this chance to really get to know Julia. Rather then just complying with what she wants him to do. He still seems to be more responding to what she says and does rather then anticipating her desires and working to actively meet them. As long as he's being passive I'm not sure if he'll ever learn how to work her effectively.
Author's Response:
you have a very good grasp of the characters; i'm actually planning to tackle some of the themes you're talking about here in Act III.
Date: August 20 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
I've noticed that in all of Jack's stories, a heavy empahsis is put on the dehumanization of the tinies and their psychological struggle to maintain their sanity. I think he balances this perfectly with the actual fetish content and mixes in enough story-related content that his work doesn't ever just feel like a collection of random fetish scenarios. I think these qualities set him apart from other authors on this site and make his work something truly remarkable.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: August 20 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
You know if you look at it from the way she treats Jack you would think she isn't that bad but with the others you see how dark and evil she is. I guess when I was wishing Julie gets a happy ending in my other review I had gotten so caught up and her relationship with Jack I forgot what she truely is.
Author's Response:
i see what you mean. she certainly is a deceptive entity
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Are u taking break cause I dont know if i can wait lol. This story will be a all time great when it is done. you sir are an "evil' genius!
Author's Response:
there will probably be a break here. i won't abandon the story though, i have the remainder already planned out
[Report This]Date: August 20 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Not sure how this will end but damn crazy Julia is going to add for some fun times in the final act.
Author's Response:
undoubtedly so. thanks for the review
Date: August 20 2012 7:42 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Oh man, Julia just has to die, she just has to, I hope its soon.
-Jake
Author's Response:
we'll have to wait and see ;)
Date: August 19 2012 11:44 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Julia is a freakin beyotch!! She killed Beth because Beth tried to help her brother! Juila has to die! Make her suffer!
Author's Response:
all in good time, sir
[Report This]Date: August 19 2012 4:18 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I hope julia gets whats coming soon!
-Jake
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner
The perfect title for Act III? "Poetic Justice"
Author's Response:
that may (or may NOT) be a theme later on in the story. the act titles will correspond to the role Jack plays in that segment of the story. Prisoner, Spy, and the third one will be called Animal.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 7:07 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
julia deserves to have a lifetime punishment just not anythime soon. like in act 3 or 4 lol great work on this story
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner
Julia must DIE! No, that would be letting her off easy...She should be shrunken, stripped naked, sodimized, disemboweled, and strung up by her own intestine!
Author's Response:
yikes. a very interesting image there!
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner
......speechless
Author's Response:
that's a good thing. :)
[Report This]Date: August 18 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner
I want to be said for Beth but I kind of view her as a potential martyr if the story plays out how I'm thinking.
Still you wrote one hell of a memorable death scene good sir.
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 41: New Member of the Family
*sits patiently for the continuation*
Date: August 17 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 40: Beth
monstrous omnipotent goddess
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EnWuL6PNCjo