[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 46: Grub
One word: WHEWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Date: November 21 2012 9:34 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I created an account specifically for this story. I love it and I am a huge fan of the protagonist. I would love to see things move in his direction soon!
Author's Response:
i certainly appreciate you doing that. i'm partial to the protagonist as well. stay tuned for further developments, the fight's not over yet
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 46: Grub
I've been waiting for this a for awhile now.
I can sense big things coming and can't wait to read each one.
Date: November 20 2012 11:32 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Nice this story is back, i cant wait for it to finish.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Whew! Once again, he just barely stays on the tight rope.
Author's Response:
Well, when you've got a circus like this going on, that's all you can hope to do.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Observation: I've noticed that you use the word "doughy" (wrt the texture of flesh) pretty regularly. Definitely unique. I've never thought of flesh as having a particularly doughy texture. It turns red and white, etc. (there are about a million common metaphors for talking about the way the skin turns color, looks, feels), but the thought of its closing like a 'dent in dough' makes me wonder...
Interesting chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I realize some of my word choices at times can feel like a stretch, but I feel like it's a good sacrifice in order to have variety and to explore some of the difficult-to-picture sensations tiny characters experience, such as being surrounded on all sides by a hand.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:20 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I feel like this is that story u dont want to read till its done because it is so well written, and when the story is done u want a sequel lol.If this is the final act then we are in for the rollercoster(named Julia) of our lifes. jacksmith5996=Greatness
Author's Response:
Yikes, let's not talk sequel until we're at the end of one story with enough main characters still intact, hmm? Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I can continue praising this story forever. god she is a big ol bitch, I think its impossible to like Julia
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
This is one of the best GTS/shrink stories out there. Only hope it will continue and develope!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed Julia as well as her attitude. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Ps how tall are the little ones? Roughly 3"?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I know somewhere in the story there's an exact height but for the life of me I can't remember. 3" sounds right though.
Date: October 20 2012 12:13 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Sorry got the wrong story mixed up in my post but I kind of imagine Julia is in some way a student at June and Carly's school lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's not a bad theory. Through tiny cameos and references to similar devices in the respective timelines, though, I do have an interconnected universe of sorts for all of the stories I've written for this site, but it's kind of hard to notice if you're not looking for it.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I know want to know what that school is doing to these young ladies...
Also another brilliant chapter.
Date: October 15 2012 11:45 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
So glad to see Julia stopped by again. This chapter is very Blackmailesque, she's becomming a bit of a foot slut. Curious thing, there could be a very easy oops with a boyfriend in your boot.
Author's Response:
"Foot slut." I love that phrase. And you're certainly right to think that about the boot; that's actually something that will be brought up in the next chapter.
Date: October 10 2012 8:52 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Is there a version of the story where the giantess isn't named Julia? I'd love to read it but you used the name of a family member and it totally kills the story for me.
Author's Response:
Sorry, this is the only version I have; I write it and post it directly on the forum. If the name is a problem for you, one suggestion I'd make is finding an actress or other public figure to associate the face with so the visualization isn't messed up for you.
Date: October 10 2012 2:49 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Those last two sentences sounded really final. I guess this means there won't be a chapter 45. :-(
Author's Response:
Oh, so wrong, good sir :)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:22 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
I am stunned to say this but this may be one of your best chapters ever. You really feel hs mind slipping away with each paragraph.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad I still have the ability to up the ante.
Date: October 09 2012 11:17 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
After the thorough way he describes and catalogues everything in his surroundings, I'm leaning toward 'insane.' I don't believe a fully sane person would be able to keep his reason in that situation.
Author's Response:
probably not a bad assumption
Date: October 09 2012 2:46 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Man I've wondered where this story has been, its definitely one of my favorites. Hope it gets finished...
Author's Response:
It will eventually be finished, it's just progressing slowly.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 2:44 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Its backkk!!! Now I wait to let your genius DO WORK! great ch. by the way, I love an author who really gets into the mind of the charachters.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 29 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Is the story going to continue? I really love it!!