Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Imho the prospect of his friends becoming their toys is the most scary thing you've ever written (never mind that she wasn't even thinking about them...).

I've been thinking what I would do in his place, but I have yet to find an option that doesn't end really bad or isn't at least terribly risky ("I can't think of them as toys, they're my size" - "oh, you're right, let's fix that!", etc).

On the other hand, there is someone who would be more than willing to be involved, but even then, I'm not sure how to revenge chapter 42 and making 100% sure Gina stays unharmed: on top of that, I've had a couple of days to think about it, and I'm afraid poor Jack will have to make a choice fast...

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Glad to hear I still have the ability to up the scary factor on this thing. You're right in thinking there aren't many great options for Jack at this point, and his chances are going to become even more limited in the next couple chapters. And unfortunately for Gina, Julia has a very liberal definition of the word toy.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys

Great chapter. Nice to see this story again.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 5:00 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Julia is an absolutely despicable human being, but it's part of what makes this story so interesting! I love reading about the battle of wits between her and Jack, an invisible battle fought with words and subtleless. It really feels more like a psychological thriller than a fetish story...I can't wait to see what you have planned for the finale, I can already see it'll be a doozy.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate the comparison to the thriller genre; that's definitely the atmosphere I'm going for.

Reviewer: NatsuDraga Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sweat Sock Hop

love this

Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Javert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

Brilliantly done.  It always boggles my mind how many 5-star rated stories there are on this site that don't even approach the quality of your work.  There are many talented authors here, but in my opinion, you're the best by a mile.

Author's Response:

Oh geez, I'm gonna blush.  Thanks for reading/reviewing, man.  I'm glad you enjoy the stories.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

"Curious" isn't the right word; I'd say "tantalized", but "this chapter made you tantalized" sounds worse than awful (keep in mind that last time I founc the story with 54 chapters already written, so I'll have to slow down my pace a lot :)

 

I can't help thinking that Jack lost a great opportunity to let some his anger out (as jealousy of course), but I guess that could have been risky.

 

And then the chapter ends... how you can still surprise us after so many chapters is beyond me, but it seems that you keep on doing it.

 

My only serious critique is that you said the story is divided in four acts; experimental evidence indicates some ~20 chapters per act, at 4months/chapter... I f***ing hate you! ;p

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!  Your guess on Jack's opportunity is not a bad one, and you may see some pay-off for it in the next chapter (hint hint).  Glad to know I can still surprise at 50+ chapters though. Act 3 is going to be a tad shorter than the previous 2, we're probably ~5 away, and the same will probably go for Act 4.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 55: Deal with the Devil

If only you updated every Sunday like Nascar...I don't watch it but would gladly check here each weekend for new updates.

 

A chilling chapter, very well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks man.  I can't imagine a Sunday commitment with this thing, especially since (in theory) there's still another full act to go on this thing.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Still have faith that this story will get a proper ending, even if Im an old man by the time it happens XD

Author's Response:

I swear, I do have a fairly elaborate ending nicely planned out on my head. It just has to be, you know, typed out and stuff.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 42: Judge, Jury, and Executioner

Wow, I finally finished it!

I guess I loved chapter 36 more than it was worth, because some femdom movies do something similar at real size and it's always been a favorite of mine.

No typo this time, but it seemed to me that explaining the escape plan to the newcomer was a bit rushed (even if, to be honest, maybe it's because I didn't read the story in proper order, and so it really struck me).

 

PS

I don't know how you go on writing stories this long, but if you publish one chapter at a time, don't expect me to comment on each one -- for one, there are enouch comments already XD, and second, the story has been able to constantly surprise me, so commenting without reading some four/five chapter would feel... short-sighted?

 

And btw: do you have any plan for Mommy's TImeout 5? It's been almost a year, you know...

 

Author's Response:

Thanks once again for your responses to this story.  I agree with you on the critique of the escape plan's explanation.  That's partially owed to a pacing issue with the story overall.  The opening two acts of the story are much more indulgent and measured in their pacing, but by the beginning of the 3rd act I realized I needed to streamline the story's speed a bit if I'm going to be able to hold reader interest reliably, especially since this story's been around for a long time.  I hope you do continue to comment on this story once I post more, even if it's only every 5 or so.

I do very much have a plan for Mommy's Time-out 5, and actually have most of it written (let's just keep that between you, me, and anyone else who happens to read this comment).  My goal is to finish Toy Teacher or at least get within a chapter of it being done before I post anything new.

Reviewer: Karmakat49 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 5:01 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I absolutely love this story! All the twist and turns are so exciting! You make it seem like this is really happening... good job and please update soon! I've been waiting for this!