Date: December 04 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
I Cannot wait for act 4 speaking of, when is it coming?
ugh this is just an amazing story and I hope the built up reaches an amazing climax. I am so pscyehed and cannot wait for the finle! This story has just have everything its for a lack of a better term insperational and EPIC! keep up the amazing work Jack.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm not really sure when Act 4 is coming, since I've got several other stories I'm working on right now. Rest assured I do have a detailed plan for the rest of the story, it just has to be physically written.
Date: November 08 2014 5:04 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Hope this story gets an update soon one of my favorite stories on this site.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the interest. There will be an update eventually, I've just been busy with other stories.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
@Jacksmith: If the ending is a doozy relative to this, you're going to need to add a sixth star.
Author's Response:
I guess I'd better get to work on that before the next chapter post then. Thanks for reading/reviewing.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
We're building towards the show down of all show downs now.
I have to say in all honesty I am rooting for these guys to free, hope they make or at least some of them.
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing. The ending is going to be something of a doozy, so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
Oh Julia is pissed now, first Charlie's. Now her prized possession boy toy is attempting a great escape.
Love this story from the start, glad it's made it so far with all of the success.
Author's Response:
That she is. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: May 23 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
ONE ACT LEFT?! *claws at ground wailing hysterically* NOOOO!
Author's Response:
There there, it'll be all right.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
SHIT HAS OFFICIALLY HIT THE FAN!
Holy crap. As if this story wasn't intense enough already...I can already begin to picture all the crazy things that Julia would be willing to do to get Jack back!
Will she kill and/or torture him when she gets him back? Or will she somehow convince herself that he was running away against his will? Will the baby be used as a hostage?
Ooooh!!!! This break is gonna be a killer.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I know I stopped at a pretty pivotal moment, so I'm going to do my best to not make the break go on for an unhealthy length of time.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
As another side effect of the long pause. it took me a few seconds to remember why they had to take the risk of running now rather than wait.
So now they entered a hole in the wall, they don't know exactly where to go, they have to decide while Julia is trying to get them, she knows where they are, her mind is... whatever it is, and unless the hole is unrealistically big she will have to try to catch them from the outside - or surprise them.
Someday that is.
A part of me wishes you had stopped right after chapter 62, you know?
On the other hand, it's more time to let things settle down and try to figure out wtf is going to happen, so I guess it's fine (it also looks like the next few chapters will be veeeeery important, so prepare them well).
Author's Response:
Oh believe me, I'm going to be taking the next chapters very seriously! I know there are a lot of factors to juggle to keep up the tension. Thanks for reading/reviewing.
Date: May 23 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 41: New Member of the Family
you write well, and I was enjoying your story. until chapter 41. call me soft, or whatever, but that ruined the story for me. I don't know why, but I couldn't read past that point. but, your writing is great, and I hope you write more
Author's Response:
Well, I appreciate you giving it a try all the same. I know the more extreme/violent stuff isn't everyone's cup of tea.
Date: May 23 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
So glad that you came back with the story and take it seriously!! This is getting really interesting...I'm always more into good plots with evil endings but this time I'd say that Julia is such an evil giantess that Jack and the rest really deserve a victory. My hurt is broken between David and Goliath, don't know who I support now.
Also, congratulations for the story, 63 chapters full of emotions, deep characters and a exciting script. Great story written by a great author. I'll look forward your next stories and of course, Jack and Julia's fate: stories like this makes the point for me to believe that reading ''giantess stories'' is more enjoyable than watching payment giantess vids. And by the way, I'm spanish and I still prefer reading you in other language than watching a gorgeousmodel crushing, fucking or eating people.
Gracias por hacerme disfrutar de esta web, de verdad.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad I've convinced you to root for the gang despite your preference for evil endings. I appreciate also your willingness to deal with a story in your second language. It's high praise when more "visual" mediums like videos exist.
Date: May 23 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
Oh well, so much for the "nice" Julia. Glad you're updating frequently. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 23 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 63: The Run
Sorry; but, "wow, alone, won't do it this time. How about...?
HOLY SHIT MOLASSES-IN-THE-WINTERTIME! WHAT AN ENDING!!
Author's Response:
You know me, defying the seasons with treacle!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
Damn, a bit of twisting and turning there.
Can't wait for the end.
Author's Response:
A bit indeed. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
That's a fine angry giantess moment.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: May 19 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
I'm stuck with a big dopey grin on my face. Send help.
Author's Response:
Emergency services will be there soon, just hang on.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
A good chapter. I'm not usually into the violent stuff, but you've painted such a good narrative and mixed in just enough Gentle GTS to keep me reading. While reading the last few chapters, I had a couple of weird thoughts about what might happen next. This involves how the birth of the baby girl might change things for Julia. One, because of Jack's shrunken size, if Julia really wanted to get lifelong serious with him they couldn't have children. What if she "adopts" the baby on her and Jack's behalf? Two, Julia might start a mini town, shrinking more people, and/or go with goddess thing that Jack convinced her of, and shrink more "worhippers". But maybe she might screen future shrinkees better.
Anyway good story and I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate you giving this a try even if it's not your preferred genre. On your thoughts: 1) You are very perceptive, and that's all I'll say for now. 2) Julia's never been great at screening her shrinkees, but very soon she may find herself in need of more of them, particularly after all the goddess stuff
Date: May 19 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
"I saw a hole in the wall. Under the flower stool outside."
"There's a hole in the batrhoom sink wall behind the blow dryer stand"
It looks like none of us were really paying attention :)
To my (partial) justification, between tv shows and relatives/neighbors/whatever discussing how someone arranged somehing in their house, this topics bore me to the point I actively try to ignore them - kinda like the "shoe shopping" gags in scrubs.
Still, it's been there in plain sight.
For a few rl days.
RESPECT!
(and if anyone noticed and decided not to spoil the surprise - sorry, too latefor taking credit, but thank you anyway)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Glad to hear Jack succeeded in pulling a fast one on not just Charlie but you as well.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
Wow. Just--plain--WOW!!
Author's Response:
:D
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie Gets His
So many chapters in and still going strong. I'm impressed. Loved the twist at the end and the tension it led to. Smart writting, good passing and damn... that Julia;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing, man. Glad you enjoy the writing. And for the love of all that is holy, please make some new DA comics!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once
There are no existing languages in any parts of our known universe worthy enough to express just how much I enjoy losing myself in this epic tale you've created. I've been following the development of each and everyone of your characters with unbridled zeal. And your writing style is so rich with details that I can picture what's going on as if it were a hit primetime tv show (I keep picturing Julia as being played by Michelle Trachtenberg). So while I am rooting for Jack and the gang to finally find their way out, another, more sadistic side of me anticipates their failure as I do not wish for this story to end anytime soon.
Can't wait to see Charlie reap what he sewed. Karma's a bitch, or, as he would put it, "...a goddamned psychotic bitch with a raging pussy."
Author's Response:
That's certainly high praise! I appreciate your comments and am glad you're enjoying the story. There's still one more 'act' of the story left, so there's still a bit to go before it's over.
It's funny you say that about Michelle Trachtenberg. The mental image I have of Julia is based off someone I know (just the look, not the psychosis), and I realize she definitely does bear a decent resemblance to Michelle back when she was closer to Julia's age based on skin tone, hair color, eyes, etc. Good thinking there, and thanks again for reviewing.