[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums
So it was the natural acoustics of the air vent that almost gave them away. Brilliantly subtle! I also--grudgingly--love Julia's bittersweet counter-plotting. She identifies a source of unexpected hope for them (which they, themselves, understandably forgot). Yet, she simultaneously bars them from it with the heavily implied threat.
Author's Response:
Julia's all about cutting off hope before it has a chance to even register.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums
Anther great chapter! I'm glad to see that they're not out of the woods yet, and that there's more of Julia to come.
Keep it up. Always makes me smile when I see that you've published another chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! I feel the same way about seeing your DA comics posted.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 8:46 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Christ, it's is bad enough that Julia's threatening to eat a woman, but an unborn baby too? Even worse, she's psychotic enough to go through with it. Can't wait to see how the refugee squad handles this.
Author's Response:
Hehe. The baby actually is born already (it's Anna's, not Gina's) though I can understand the confusion, since I posted those chapters early last year...
Date: March 07 2015 8:29 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
great chapter ! ultimate dilemma
Author's Response:
Thanks. It is indeed.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
Glad to see this story being updated regularly now. Definitely shorter chapter, but it's like a give take thing.
If Julia captures them, will she hurt Jack? I'm not sure. If she doesn't I'm not sure what there plan is. Julia still has the others trapped, and she still has the shrink gun. If they escape the house they will still have problems.
Author's Response:
Thanks. The chapter lengths can vary greatly in this story; I like to try to find the more natural stopping places for events with this one.
You're right that there really isn't a good option available to them now. They just have to wing it.
Date: March 03 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
Between when they took off down the hole and the end of this chapter, I was actually feeling a little sorry for Julia. The level of betrayal she must be feeling at our hero's sudden escape must be off the charts. This is one situation where I felt some annoyance at the first person perspective of the story. I want to know what happened with her right after they escaped.
Author's Response:
Probably an accurate guess about Julia's feelings. It's fair to want to know what she was up to right after they ran, though the trade-off here is that the three (and readers) can't even know what kind of state the girl is truly as they get ready to escape. Some of that will be revealed in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
GREAT cliffhanger.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is on the way.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 3:14 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Oh how I've missed this story! Happy that you're adding to it again!
P.S. is the baby with them, I don't wanna go back and find it :p
Author's Response:
Thanks. And Julia has the baby.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
Oh, brother! Please, don't tell me one of them is GPS-chipped!!
Author's Response:
Now that would certainly be an unfortunate turn of events
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
I forgot how much this story reminds me of two of my all time favorites; Summer Job by Cayce and Bugman Games by Solar Crimson.(that's damn good company if you ask me)
Anyways, I almost stopped reading this story when Brian's sister was murdered because that scene kinda through me for a loop. But I recently convinced myself to follow this thing to the end so here I am. Great writing as usual. You've done a remarkable job even though I may not like the general tone, I guess in a way I see myself as one of those remaining tinies hoping for a happy ending(as cliché as that sounds).
However, I don't want to try and persuade you into making an ending to my liking because that would greatly jeopardize the integrity of your story.
Julia is definitely a sexy antagonist that I can't wait to see more of.
aaron
PS I saw your newer story but haven't had a chance to read it yet. I will though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Those are indeed good company to be in. I agree the tone is much darker in this one than in most of my others. As usual, I won't speculate on where the conclusion is going, but hopefully there will be some sense of satisfaction for it as an ending, good or bad. Hope you like the new story as well.
Date: March 03 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
As bad as our three fugitives have it, at least they (unlike me) aren't wearing shorts that just got soiled.
Author's Response:
This is probably the one and only optimistic outlook they could be having.
Date: March 03 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 65: Front Lines
"little pet' are save but still living dangerously... nice chap
Author's Response:
Thanks. Safety is only ever slight in this story.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2015 7:15 PM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
Good chapter. Their desperation was palpable.
Please tell me this ends with Julia annihilating them all and going on to rule the universe. Just a suggestion.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And you wouldn't want me to spoil the ending, would you?
[Report This]Date: February 28 2015 5:56 PM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
I'm hoping they _do_ find a way out and attract the attention of someone more sane than Julia. And I equally hope the concluding chapter gets posted in one-ninth the time it took to get his one!
;-D
Author's Response:
They're certainly going to try. One-ninth may be tough, but there are more chapters on the way very soon.
Date: February 27 2015 2:35 PM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
I know this story i'm glad it's update but as non english reader, i want to get it right: are they climbing down vertically or they're sliding down?
Author's Response:
Climbing down vertically.
Date: February 27 2015 9:59 AM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
Let's just see what's new today...[SQUEAL!]
Adrenaline taste hit me before I finished the first paragraph.
Author's Response:
Excellent, sounds like my experimental new edible writing is working.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 9:26 AM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
I'm surprised that it has been I updated. Has it really been 9 months?? Well anyways I'm so glad. This is a wonderful story.
Author's Response:
It has indeed been 9 months. I figured I should bring it back soon before people forget what the hell was going on in this thing last.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 8:00 AM Title: Act IV: Warrior, Chapter 64: Out of Her Hands
JULIA!!!!
Great to see this back!
Author's Response:
Thanks man
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Teacher's Pets
The first chaper was terrible. Too much backstory in stuffed into a chapert. I felt myself going to sleep. The second was better, but not by much. Sorry man. You've got a great idea, but the way you're precenting it is off.
Author's Response:
I will be sure to take this into account when I write the third chapter someday.
Date: January 17 2015 11:07 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I will not lie when I say this is the best story I have found on giantessworld. Had me captivated throughout the whole thing. Make sure you update, because I cannot wait for the next installment!!!
~giantesslover122
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for your kind words. I promise there will be an update eventually. I've taken longer than I intended after getting sidetracked on other stories.