Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 68: Inside Knowledge

You're building toward something riveting. In Shrink Act Files, and now here, you made it clear that a lot of abuses are happening around Techilogic, but gave next to no information about the company's higher-ups. I can't wait to find out what exactly Techilogic is and does.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I've purposefully been very frugal with information I provide on Techilogic to avoid spoiling stuff from future or ongoing stories, but more about them will continue to trickle out in relevant locations.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 9:16 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

You have a very intriguing story, characters I can connect to, a three dimensional protagonist, actual drama, shocking twists, questioning morality and sanity, suspenseful thrills and a villain you can fear. WAIT, THIS IS PORN!?

Author's Response:

Thanks! I admit a lot of the recent stuff has been less pornographic, though the climax of the story will involve more up-close-and-personal interaction with Julia again.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 68: Inside Knowledge

Now that i think about, if Blackmail happened in the same universe as the shrink act, does that mean that Jack's parents used the PMRD to give jack his full size back? Hell, i can even see Techilogic using such a thing to give themselves some good PR, especially since the public seems to be sypathetic towards Jack. 

I'm also thinking that it was really lucky for Jack that Carly was shrunk before the whole thing went public, otherwise Techilogic might have kidnapped him. Then again, taking Carly was likely easier for them, few people would care about a criminal disappearing after all. 

 

@AdamX: I don't know, as great as a villain Carly was, i always felt Jack deserved his happy ending, especially since he fought hard for it. But that's me. 

Author's Response:

In answer to your other review: you're right that Carly doesn't know the chemical formula, so Techilogic wouldn't have wanted her for that. I won't say anything more, though, since some of that will be shown in a later story.

Now for this one, it's a good thought, though Blackmail actually takes place prior to the invention of the PMRD, so even after Jack is saved, there's still not yet a way to put him back to normal. Glad to know you think Jack deserved a happy ending!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 68: Inside Knowledge

That's interesting.  I wonder what Technologic did with Carly then. Since everyone thinks she's in prison, i'm guessing they didn't just let her go free. 

 

They experimented on her maybe? It couldn't be to ask her about the shrinking process, since Jack and his cousin were the ones that knew the details of how to shrink someone. I mean, otherwise Carly would have shrunk more people. 

Goood job sir, you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention! 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 10:59 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

if I get it right : Techilogic had already a shrinking formula so they hired Goodwin to make PMRD. After that, Goodwin discouvered Carly (truth which is not fully reveled) and they tried to kill him. Seeking revenge Goodwin decided to jailbreak PMRDs then sell them in black hoping a new bigger scandale. but he Ended up shrunk by julia. Am I right? 

Author's Response:

You're basically right, yes. Techilogic did not actually have a working formula, but they did know about what made Jack shrink, and they had Goodwin design the PMRD. They tried to kill Goodwin because he knows something about Carly but also about the people in Techilogic.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 67: The Man in the Wall

Quite the twist which leads me to believe our little sadist is higher on the evil foodchain than Carly or even Judy...

Author's Response:

Fair consideration. Neither Carly nor Judy have murdered someone before, unlike this particular little sadist.

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 67: The Man in the Wall

I already read (and enjoyed) A Little Blackmail complete series and just leaft through The Srhink Act Files but can't remember who this guy is. Although, I have a bad feeling about Brian, Kelly and Jack situation. I don't know why but I think this PMRD guy may lead them to Julia back again...not sure at all about trusting him.

The plot gets even more exciting!! Kee up the great work!! :) :)

Author's Response:

It's ok to not remember - the connection to this story is a small one, though it will make some of what's coming soon clearer. And you may be right to not trust this guy. Brian, Kelly, and Jack certainly won't.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 67: The Man in the Wall

Bad play, Art.  Brian's got a lot of frustrated rage pent up, and when he realizes A) Goodwin hasn't been able to escape himself for three years, and B) Goodwin has probably been aware of their entire captivity and didn't do anything to help until now...

Author's Response:

Hehe. "Frustrated rage" may be an understatement, as the next chapter will show. There's definitely some explaining to be done.

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums

Yeah, that's true, it would be a high risk. Anyways, I enjoy your stories no matter if they end up good or bad for the main character ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks. There will probably be plenty of both good and bad by the end of this thing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 66: Sucker for Ultimatums

This might be your best cliffhanger yet! Looking forward to how this one gets resolved or further drawn out...either way I'm waiting lol.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Hopefully some of the future cliffhangers I have coming for this story can top it...