Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2024 1:33 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I just found this story kind of randomly, and I must say it was just terrific. The characterization was well thought out. Each person had good consistent personalities. The description of the house had just enough detail to set the stage. The terror factor of Julia's domination was excellent. I liked how you had her thinking being so flawed given that she was only a teenager. I loved the god complex she had and how her crush made her vulnerable.

I know you got a crap ton of reviews on this, but I haven't seen any lately. So I thought I would thank you for this terrific read.

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2022 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: Master Plan

It's so sad but this meeting is probably the saddest yet most hopeful chapter so far. The fact they have to go so far in order to get free is frightening!

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 61: Everything Happens at Once

Charlie is the most pathetic simp and biggest scumbag ever. 😡

Seriously isn't this dude like 30 and is still so horny for a 16 year old girl? 

 

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 59: Snitches Get Stitches

Charlie's character legitimately disturbs because there are some people in the real world who actually have the same mindset as him 😨

Reviewer: Butt Slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2020 4:41 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Julia was the first giantess story I remember reading from start to finish. I came for the smut, and stayed for the plot. It's still shocking all these years later that I can say a story uploaded to a website I generally only use to get off is actually of rather high quality.

I wish the story had more butt stuff - I remember I originally clicked on it because of the Butt tag - but it had plenty else to hold my attention.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review on such an old story. Yeah, the butt tag is a bit of a technicality in this one, but glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.

Reviewer: Sony Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2018 8:09 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I really liked this mate, but there is something im interested. Do you ever considered writing this from Julia's eyes? I would love to read what she was thinking.

Author's Response: It hadn’t occurred to me to write a parallel perspective story; I wrote Julia (the character) to feel like a horror/thriller antagonist, a bit enigmatic and unpredictable. I never say never with this stuff, but don’t have plans to write a Julia POV. I’ve shifted over to writing commissions lately anyway. But I appreciate the interest in my work.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2018 11:11 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

Just curious if you had someone specific in mind (physically) when describing Charlie?

MY MIND ACHES FOR VISUAL AID

Reviewer: TheJackdaw_v2 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2017 4:29 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I read thru this story a long while back, but I must have read thru it really fast or something because I hardly remember it being this good! This just might be my all time favorite story on here.. The character development, the setting, the characters themselves, all these things are really good. The surprises you threw in there were a really nice addition as well. Arthur Goodwin? I did not see him coming! I like it when stories are well thought out, where the peices are slowly but methodically put together in such a way that it all comes together nicely by the end. With that said, I don't know how I  would have preferred this little tale to end, so I can't say it ended badly, but I feel like something was missing. Don't get me wrong, you ended it greatly! But something, which I cannot seem to put my finger on, was missing. Perhaps this was meant to be..? Let the  readers ponder it; leave them thinking.. Overall, I'm a sucker for happy/bittersweet endings. This is most definitely in my top 3 favorites.

Author's Response:

Thanks for rereading, and I'm glad you liked it. The ending I'm sure has potential to alienate some readers. Ultimately I had to go with a primarily happy ending, after all the dragging torment of the preceding chapters. I simultaneously left the reader to imagine how the group's life went afterward in higher detail, as the story is really meant to be about their teamwork in captivity rather than the aftermath.

Reviewer: iHategiants666 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2015 8:42 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I honestly can't see Evans or Johanssen in a story like this, but then again, I can't see any famous actors in any Giantess story.

I think maybe Jay Baruchel, if he was looking for money, might be a good role for Jack.

 

Nonetheless, I am impressed with how far you managed to carry this story and keep the readers enthused. 76 chapters is quite a milestone.

Author's Response:

Jay at least has the good-natured semi-bumbling personality. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Julianz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 6:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Good Night

Wow, this is amazing. I have to admit, I've seen this story many times, and I never really gave it much thought to try and read it. But when I remembered about it, after coming back into writing again myself, I decided to give it a little read. And boy, have you done something. Jack, you've made yourself, in my opinion, one of the best writers this site has had the pleasure of seeing.

As for my thoughts on the story, everything was great. I loved how you made each character's personality show without down right saying it, revealing it through their actions and dialogue. The ending made me feel like something was missing though, I wanted to see how Jack and Gina's relationship blossomed after escaping their literal hell. What did they do after everything? I also feel like Julie got out too easy. She received a rather quick and easy death when she should have been tortured the same way she did to Jack and Gina, as well as the others. But two wrongs don't make a right, and I'm glad (most of) everyone made it out and went to live another day.

This was a real page turner, and a must read for everyone on the site.

(Ps. Sorry about this review, it might not be something you liked reading. I've never really written a review showing what I thought of the entirety of the story, so I don't really know what I should write. Apologies in advance.)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed the story overall. I can understand your concerns with the ending. I decided showing Jack and Gina's relationship going forward would've distracted from tying up everything having to do with Julia herself. Other readers wanted to see Julia be tortured as well, but it wouldn't have made sense for them to reciprocate. Their refusal to lower themselves to Julia's methods of torture is what separates them from her.