Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked the story though the ending was somewhat sudden and it would have been nice to have to have more development instead of the tiem skips. I find it odd that these people can randomly shrink people and whole boats and go unpunished although I have a feeling that this story could serve as somewhat of an insperation for him.