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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 2:36 PM Title: In the witch's house

nice to see this story again an cant wait to see what happens with jake.

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Date: October 20 2011 10:22 PM Title: Into the woods

great chapter.


aaron

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2011 10:40 AM Title: Into the woods

I like the fairytale-like yarn coupled with the historical setting. I also like how you foreshadow his appreciation for the red-headed Amber with his preference for the red-headed Katrina.

I'm very curious to see where you're going with this story. I'm a big gentle vore lover, myself.

You probably wrote this quickly, not allowing the rules of writing to mess with your flow. I do think it would benefit from being copied into a word processor to have the spell and grammar check weed out some of the problems you missed.

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 10:09 AM Title: Into the woods

Not a bad start.  I'm curious to see what happens next so I'll be looking for your next update.  Keep up the good work!

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