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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's alright but I'll have to read the next chapter to decide whether or not I like it. It was a bit wierd what the tiny voice called all of a sudden because I'm not sure how someone in a mundane office job can be a goddess but but I guess everything will be explained.



Author's Response:

To a tiny person, a woman can be a giantess; to a very desperate and lonely tiny person, she can be a goddess. Yeah, some people toss the word around easily, but I hope it all becomes clear.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting and slightly bizarre set-up. You have me intrigued.



Author's Response:

I think the bizarre start could be a hook. Too bad it took me six years to build on it. Hope you're still around to check out the new chapter!

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