Date: June 06 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm 12 years late, but where's the text lol. It was just starting to get really spicy
Date: November 25 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just when I thought this story couldn't get any better...it does. I really like Mei, she actually reminds me of a friend I used to hang out with. The direction this seems to be going intrigues me. A looming showdown between Dupont and Stewart, all the while with Stewart fending off the suspicion of the DCI? I know this is going to be good.
Keep up the good work. BTW, what ever happened to that other story you were working on? And will you be adding more?
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the lovely feedback. I'm hoping to add more to the other story. I tend to flick between stories as I reach a point where I need to sit back and plan the next phase and there's this thing called "real life" which frequently upsets all the best laid plans of little men dressed in mice costumes and women :-) xxx
[Report This]Date: November 16 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Another good chapter. I think the only thing that would have made this better is if the narrator would have referred to the DCI by name throughout. I understand that the narrator is her subordinate so it would be unlikely for her to refer to her boss by name, but I think that it would have made this chapter more personal and therefore more sensual.
That's such a little thing though. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. You continue to impress.
Author's Response:
I think you're right about using the DCI's name - I shall edit it accordingly. Thank you for the lovely feedback. xxx
[Report This]Date: November 13 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
So...does this mean she passed her initiation? No, really, that chapter was mind blowing. You are a very good writer with effective use of the words to paint a picture. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories on this site. I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you F_G_F - I like to keep people intrigued ;-) xxx
[Report This]Date: November 10 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Once again, you have outdone yourself. This chapter was simply amazing. I absolutely loved the "human thong" piece. Fantastic. As for the overall storyline and plot, this is uncommonly good. I am enjoying every minute of it and cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely feedback - I'm glad at least one person likes the story :-) xxx
[Report This]Date: November 07 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
This story just keeps getting better and better. Incredible writing. I really like what is going on in Lisa's mind, pitting herself against Elle. Very good touch. I look forward to reading what you have next.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another wonderful chapter. It keeps getting better and better. Well done! I am looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Keep at it, Lady Lisa. I am hooked!
[Report This]Date: October 05 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome, Lisa! I absolutely love this story so far! Four chapters in and I find myself checking in every few hours to see if there's been another chapter added!! I have to say that your writing style is very professional, and like a printed mystery thriller you have me absolutely hooked! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'm very flattered by your kind comments BigAl xxx
[Report This]Date: October 05 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting chapter. Very erotic dream, yet unsettling. I am looking forward to seeing where you are going with this and am eagerly awaiting more!
Date: October 05 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
cool story. i look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the beginning of this story girlfood :-) xxx
Date: October 04 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I've never read a murder mystery on here before. Welcome to giantessworld Lisa. I think I remember seeing this story on giantesscity. Oh by they way, I come the UK too. Where I come from there are lots of posh people, I suppose because we still have Grammar schools in my part of the world.
Author's Response:
Yes, I posted it on Giantess City first and now here. There's no posh people where I live unless you include the Cheshire set :-) xxx
[Report This]Date: October 03 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
As with your other story, this one really piqued my curiosity. I really like the style here, very mysterious. You seem like a very talented writer and I am looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us.