Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 71: ONE SMALL STEP FOR ANN...

If he does escape, he'll be Hum-free!

Author's Response:

Very good!

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 17: CARROLL BY CANDLE LIGHT

nice touch writing  Carroll into the story. I also enjoy the puns in the chapter titles.

Author's Response:

Thanks for saying so.

I thought his Charles Dodgson identity doesn't otherwise get enough notice, and he was a great instrument for me to put some christian message into it.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 68: IT'LL BE A CAKE WALK

And, Poppet grows up to become...Jack the Giantess-Killer!

Seriously, though: these last three chapters were the most suspenseful, yet. I read them in one sitting!

Author's Response:

Reminds me of another reader who told me by email (before he did start on this story) "I wanted to check out AIG, but was daunted by the large size of it". He didn't realise his pun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 64: A WARM WELCOME

Good riddance! I was getting bored with his constant whining about _not_ getting eaten.

Author's Response:

It gets very annoying, doesn't it? To paraphrase Flanders and Swan, she'll eat him, even if she can't digest his opinion.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 62: THE HEART BEFORE THE COURSE

Well, at least it's not a birdcage.

Author's Response:

No, but the cat and MOUSE agenda may yet come into play again.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 60: TENDER LICKING CARE

Pix-is finally showing some good sense.*

* I do not use the phrase "common sense," anymore, as that is a contradiction in terms. Much like "happily married."

;-)

Author's Response:

Well the Devil has used every tactic (including television and movie-glorified adultery) to destroy the institution of marriage, but I'm going to trust God and wait and hope and not undermine anyone else's marriage.

Love your opening pun in this review. I wonder if he's seen it yet.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 58: GULP GOES THE GRIZEL?

Heh! I thought sure they were going to be eaten by a (female) troll living under the bridge.

:-(

Author's Response:

I can't believe this thing's reached 8000 read count in less than 2 weeks.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 56: PIXI DECLARES HIS LOVE

He may now be the size of an insect to her. But, that doesn't men Mrs. Parkin should eat him.

"Just say 'no' to bugs."

Author's Response:

She may just have to ad lick

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 54: A SECOND HELPING OF CAKE

Be careful what you wish for, Pixi. You might get it.

Author's Response:

For once, I had the woman act the way most women would in this situation, ie with reluctance to eat the boy and difficulty in understanding his urge.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 53: LEVELS OF ACTING

*Pity becomes fully serious.*

Author's Response:

PLAY-fully so.