Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2011 3:40 PM Title: Prologue

I've never been one to need to know about bra sizes, but in the last chapter I noticed she has "D"s whereas in this chapter she has "E"s.

I don't think "predicted" is a viable alternative to said but I could be wrong.

Also, thrown is spelt throne I believe.

I'm curious as to how the little people managed to acquire the recourses to build such big cities and how the ever expanding population is supported. I'm struggling to understand how just one city in one cellar can have over (nearly) a million people and how her television can receive broadcasts from the little people.

It's a good story nonetheless and highly original in terms of the concept because usually in this kind of situation the main character is normal not so kind.

 

Author's Response:

Hi Stubbornstain,

Thanks for the correction and compliment. Spellcheck is awesome, but misses those mistakes that are actual words themselves. As got the growth you've noticed the prologue and chapter one are eight years apart. She has gotten a little taller and a little bustier in that time. The scale is Lilliputian to Brobdingnagian...which is much closer to the scale presented here though I admit that I did increase the size difference a bit from what was presented in Gulliver's Travels. Thanks again.

minuss