Date: September 04 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 – Leave a sleeping Goddess lie
great chapter! not usually into 'horror' as erotica, but this works!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2012 11:12 PM Title: Prologue
I really liked this story, but mostly for the beginning. I'm a huge fan of mega/giga sized giantess, but I also really love the gentle side of the fetish. Not many stories, images, etc capture any form of gentleness on this scale. I hate John for various reasons, but later on I can't help but agree with his point of view. Just not his method of showing it to everyone else. I have, during my free time, been making an 'alternate' version of the story. Much of the beginning is still yours, but I've been rewriting almost everything past chapter 3 to fit my tastes. I can't post my version for moral and legal reasons, but I would like to send you it through email when finished. I need an opinion on my writing style. I'm about 45% done with what I hope to do, and am working on it for an hour a day. If you are okay with me sending it to you, please reply.
I also promise not to post my version anywhere without your express permission. I just wanted to clarify, so you wouldn't think I was using it as my own work.
Also, if you saw my previous review before I deleted it, I did so because it didn't look as good as it sounded in my head.
Author's Response:
Hi ZombieGhost,
Sorry, I am not the best at responding sometimes. I am fine with you sending it to me or even posting it without doing so. I don't want to stand in the way of any new content; I am not tying to make a living from this or anything. If you do post a re-write just indicate that its an alternate universe of my story in the post and then its fine by me. You can PM me at gc if you want me to look anything over. If anybody gives you any guff for posting the re-write just point them here as proof for permission.
minuss
[Report This]Date: March 12 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 9: Armageddon
Very great. Not a fan of this genre but I love this story. Love how you seem to make it real with all the aspects of the tinies you wrote them in beautifully an it was cool how she would just walk an cause unprecedented amounts of damage just with her foot steps. But my favorite part was with Clair an Melvin with her trying to save him an him getting sucked up by her. Was very sad but also a cool scene. An the part where she was being held onto two people while trying to get in the ditch reminded me of the movie 'twister' an then Matt refuses to let go of her a manages to pull her in. Only wish that they could leave threw this horrible ordeal. So inspiring how they found love amiss all this chaos.
Octant wait to see what becomes of her sister on the dresser and of her when the police arrive.
Ps was Melvin a bum? Is that why he was so worried about his cart?
Well great read an glad to see this story back.
Can't wait to see when well see more of 'wedding story'.
Author's Response:
Glad you like this story. Melvin was a street vendor. The cart and the merchandise were how he made his living. Thanks for commenting,
minuss
[Report This]Date: January 24 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
Is there no 10 chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest. The remaining chapters are still in progress. When they are completed and proofed I will post them here and at GC. I had hoped to have an update to this one by now, but I have been working on one of my other stories The Wedding Story lately. I have been switching between the two.
minuss
[Report This]Date: December 21 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
Once again you've delivered yet another awesome couple of chapters. Eventhough this isn't my favorite type of story with it just being the mega an micro, but I find myself really enjoying this tale an waiting more. The only thing that I didn't like was the fact the the one guy warned her of her impending doom(not that I blame him she seems hot an sexy as hell) I just wanted her to finally get what's coming to her.
Aside from that eventhough it was too easy for him to be the DA assistant it fit well with bringing the story along. Well done
Aaron
Can I expect another addition to wedding story before the new year?
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it. I have nothing in progress yet for Wedding Story other than a few unwritten ideas. It doesn't mean that there won't be an update before the new year, but the chances are probably low: maybe 15-20%. Inspiration would have to strike fast and furiously for it to occur before Jan 1st.
minuss
Date: December 20 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8: Getting Rachael
First thing, I found the destruction of the cities utterly boring but that's not really your fault minuss, I've just read too many mega stories with the same thing. With most mega giantess rampages there is really no tension in what's going on because it's usually a pointless slaughter. There is nothing really to keep me engaged besides the sexual aspect which nowadays is starting to fade. So while there is obviously a large audience for that sort of thing, it's just not for me anymore I suppose. In the end I pretty much skimmed through what Rachel was doing to the cities and concentrated on the few story bits. While Jared may have screwed the basement civilzation, it didn't matter, since Rachel was going to wipe them all out anyway. I like how despite Rachel wiping out like three cities, it took all of Eugene's men getting killed to realize that Rachel is a psycho bitch and really doesn't care about any of them. I have a feeling the ending is going to leave me depressed/pissed like In over your head. Normally I would have stopped reading this story due to mindless mega giantess violence, but typically when I start reading a story I always try to read all the way to the ending. Next time I'll definitely going to focus on the more gentler giantess stories.
No rating since it's not really fair to rate something I'm not feeling anymore.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your candor and I can understand your objections. However, it's been a while since I have written a story with wanton destruction and it was planned that this story would contain a lot of that from the get go. The story would've been much better, imo, if I had the time to fill in the eight years from the prologue through to chapter one. I could've illustrated the goddess's slow corruption from innocent do gooder to the power addicted person she has become, but it would've never been finished. As it is it will approach 60,000 words maybe more. Maybe I'll get to it later, piecemeal, like with the Wedding Story epilogues. Not sure if that would help it in your opinion or if you dislike all evil giantess scenarios.
minuss
[Report This]Date: December 18 2011 5:19 AM Title: Prologue
Hello,
I would like to say I love your stories. Well written, great plot, superb job. In fact the story I like most and read lots of times is All over your head (with Jamie). Would you think about developing epilogue chapters as you've done with the wedding story ? I would like to know what happened to Jamie after that night and how Brandy's trial will continue.
Tks in advance.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like my stories. I currently have no plans for epilogues to In Over Your Head. Its not out of the realm of possibiliy that I would visit it again one day, but it wouldn't likely be anytime soon. Thanks for the compliments.
minuss
[Report This]Date: October 28 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sister Schemes
holy crap.. what an amazing chapter. this story is really remarkable. i mean eventhough im not a fan of micro.. this story may just sway me to that spectrum of gts literature. not saying that i like it as much as the 1"-3" sizes but thanks to your stories im finding that i dont dismiss a story just cause its 'micro'. thank you.
one question i have: what are the rebellions going to do to her? i mean shes basically right, all they could really hope to do is scrap her toe-nail polish...
well minuss, just keep doing what your doing cause i really appreciate all the time an effort that goes into your stories. it really shows.
ps debra from 'the wedding story', will she be coming back? or perhaps another blast from the past? (i only ask here because you dont seem to reply to that story)
pps sorry for the long-winded response.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like this story and the Wedding Story. You are correct, physically she is probably beyond the reach of the rebellion. I am toying with an alternate ending where she is not. So, I may end up writing two endings we'll see. As for the Wedding Story I can't really answer your Debra question because I don't know myself. The epilogues to that story are unique for me. Usually, I'll create a rough outline of a story and so I'll know the outcome before I get to the ending. However, the Wedding Story was already complete and the epilogues were supposed to be one-off short scenes. However, they have been coming to me faster and more frequently than I thought they would when I wrote the first one. So, we'll just have to see. With those I'm making it up pretty much as I go along.
minuss
[Report This]Date: October 28 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sister Schemes
As I had said before awesome story.
I really like how cruel she is and how you play up the size difference it is great.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5: Family Ties
remarkable story. love this new dynamic too. cant wait to see what happens when the 'sisters' spend some girl time together.
aaron
ps are you gonna be adding anymore to a wedding story?
Author's Response:
Yep. Just posted the next Epilogue scene.
minuss
Date: October 19 2011 7:40 PM Title: Prologue
You are an amazing writer, possibly the best on Giantess World. I prefer gentler giantesses, so I really liked the first few chapters and some of your other stories set in the Gulliver universe. I wanted to start out by saying that because everything else is nitpicking, which in my opinion is something a great story deserves (to make it better) but can be confused for derision (which it is not intended to be).
My main criticism is that you've mangled the size scales. In Gulliver's Travels the human : Lilliputian scale is 12:1, the Brobdingnagian : human scale is also 12 : 1, thus the Brobdingnagian : Lilliputian scale is 144 : 1. This would make all the tiny people in that universe about 1/2". Small, yes, but not nearly as small as in your story. As you make no use of the other qualities of Brobdingnag or Lilliput it might be better served just calling this the Minuss Universe
The scale in your story seems to be about 6000 : 1 (6" statue is 3000 feet). Manhattan has about 1.5 million people and would be 20' by 2', not near the size of a small TV tray. Even if you assume a population density similar to Macau (50000 /sq. mi), you'd need about 15 square feet to fit a million people at a 6000 : 1 scale. And that's just dense urban land. To fit what amounts to a small country (~10000 sq miles) in a basement (~400 square feet) would require a scale of about 24000 : 1 (or higher). That may be a better scale to work from.
Alternately, you could just ignore this nerdy stuff and keep with what you've got, because it works well even with minor scale inconsistencies.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment and critique I welcome both. I will admit, as I have before, that I altered the stated scale in the original Swift classic. The scale is closer to the Milo Minera Gullivera drawings where the scale looks closer to 1-2 inch tall Lilliputians. I could have called it the minuss universe I suppose, but I liked the concept of the three sizes and as Gulliver's Travel’s is in the public domain and universally familiar I decided to lean on it. Having said all that, it is difficult to maintain consistent scale across all physical objects in an altered size story throughout a large story. My guess is that Gulliver's Travels does not even succeed at it completly. I realized while writing this story that the population density somewhat defied credulity when compared to the real world, but I don't think it is physically impossible at this scale for this density. I tried to address the density issue with some explanation in the story. I guess the comparison should be to an ant colony and not to Manhattan, in my opinion. Despite all this I know that probably in all my stories there are some minor scale issues as I think all stories of this ilk face. I suppose if enough effort was applied all scale issues could be eliminated, but then my already slow pace would be reduced much further, not to mention any detriment that much math and modeling would have on other aspects of the story. Please don't view this response as overly defensive. All of your critiques are valid and I enjoy discussing them. I am simply trying to provide rational and maybe just a little defense of the story development decisions made. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
minuss
Date: October 15 2011 12:22 PM Title: Prologue
The writing style is as good as it gets. Few and far between are writers who can describe thoughts and motivation so well. I disagree with one of the reviewers: the dual points of view are excellent. The plot is unique for this genre and the characters seem true to themselves. Let's hope our goddess brings in a friend-- male or female (or both)-- to see her cities.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Vulnerable Goddess
man i love your stories. please continue.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like them. Thanks for your comments here and elsewhere.
minuss
Date: October 08 2011 6:44 PM Title: Prologue
Plot wise, it's kinda unique, totally nonsensical though but so is this genre :p so I'm not going to stress that. I mostly see this story ending in tragedy for the Lill's. I don't know if they attempted it, but did the resistance try to protest in a normal...err, relatively normal fashion before they tried to escape? I assumed that if they did their "Goddess" would just smite them with *insert body part* for being ungrateful or whatever. Trying to escape is equally foolish because the chances of them finding help are smaller than they are, but at the same time they really have no choice which is quite sad.
So far I haven't quite clicked with any of the characters yet. The Giantess is a boderline sociopath nympho with delusions of godhood whose moral compass malfuctioned some years ago. Now considers the people she saved nothing but toys for her amusement. At this point I don't think she's getting more lili's to save them, she keeping the flow going for herself. And since I keep feeling like the lili's are going to die anyway I found myself not really trying to attach myself to them but that may change if the story progresses.
Fetish wise, it's pretty good, I like the micro/mega interactions.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: Celebration
awespme chapter. loved the dialog, an details.
aaron
ps hope that her internet date is a gulliverian.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 2:55 PM Title: Prologue
wow read the whole thing in one sitting. i love the little resistance thats shaping up! But how about some of HER life away from the civilisation or maybe some get out and realise why they need a goddess? Just ideas its a brill story keep it up! :)
[Report This]Date: October 01 2011 3:04 AM Title: Prologue
Awesome chapter.
Love the way that they feel they can gain something from escaping. Hope there hope will be crushed in a nice fashion.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2011 5:36 PM Title: Prologue
Awesome as always. :) Following you since "Prisoner of Marriage". Great stuff, and written in such an erotic way.
Date: September 30 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: New shipment
The changing on the point of view is annoying because I noticed you repeated yourself a few times and it made me slightly confused in places because I thought it was a mistake.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2011 2:19 AM Title: Prologue
I have loved all of your previous stories in the Gulliver universe.
Don't know if I have left a review before but they are great.
And this one is shaping up to be equally great.