[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: Lunch Encounter
And, he's OFF (on the misadventure of a lifetime)!
Date: October 29 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Almost missed the latest chapter! Great work, as always.
If I may ask, what's been keeping you?
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you liked it. this chapter was sort of a random thing, b/c i've kind of lost the drive to add stuff up here. at this point it'll probably be at odd, when-i-feel-like-it intervals
Date: October 29 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
oh snap! cliffhanger! is it mandy come to get her revenge!? :O
Date: October 29 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 9: Lunch Encounter
It's a been a long wait and now a cliffhanger. Cliffhangers are so annoying. I hope it's not too long until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
we'll see, i'll have to be in the mood to write it
[Report This]Date: October 02 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I read the first 8 chapters in one sitting. I think the story is great so far. It is slower than your other stuff. But still done very well.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8: Water Sports
Mandy might have been initially, and unwittingly, thoughtless. But, I think he's now made an enemy that a certain chick-clique just might find exploitable.
Date: October 01 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 8: Water Sports
Gosh, I'm glad Peter didn't die. So is lunch break next?
Author's Response:
yep
[Report This]Date: September 30 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Kind of makes you wonder what this girl's problem is.
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
i'm sure if peter wasn't fictional, he'd be wondering the very same thing
Date: September 28 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
I love your descriptions. The simple act of Mandy picking him up in her hand was more vividly described than in many stories. It really helps the reader get into Peter's mind.
(And yes, I think this is already interesting.)
Author's Response:
thanks, i appreciate the affirmation. i realize that this story is much slower than most of mine, and i'm hoping it can be as enjoyable
Date: September 28 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Great so far. So when is it gonna get interesting
Author's Response:
well, i'd like to think some people think it's already interesting; this is going to be a much slower paced story than my normal ones, but it will eventually get more intense
[Report This]Date: September 28 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
I think Peter is the first guy in history to have a girl give him the "brush-on."
;-)
Author's Response:
my mind is boggled to imagine where you continuously get these puns
Date: September 28 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
Hmm, I always wondered how Peter would write and do his homework at that size. Even if he's on the computer, using a normal size keyboard must be a pain. And if he's writing than his handwriting would be so small and a pain to read. But also books would be awkward to read unless he has someone ot read them for him. Sorry, I probably shouldn't have mentioned those things as I may have burst your bubble. I can only hope you have a solution for everything.
Author's Response:
Well he doesn't actually use the computer, he gives his tiny homework assignments to his mother, who blows them up on the scanner, and then she sends them. and yes, his writing probably is a pain to read, but if he writes larger even relative to the page it probably helps. and he doesn't have tiny copies of the books, but if his mother just pulls them up on the computer or, say, an ebook (current culture reference, ha!) at home then he can look through them that way. so, my bubble is currently still intact. you do always like to keep me on my toes, don't you?
[Report This]Date: September 26 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 6: Class Chat
liked this chapter alot..
this chapter was made real for me because who would lie about playing the clarinet. lol. an i love the direction this story seems to headed in.
great job an i cant wait to see more.
aaron
Author's Response:
haha don't hate on the clarinet! some of my best friends are clarinetists. thanks for the review.
Date: September 26 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 6: Class Chat
Lisa's reactions in this chapter were very endearing. It's unusual in this genre to see a woman flinching and being uncomfortable with a tiny man. I agree with the reviewer who said you're handling this very realistically. Nice job.
Author's Response:
thanks, bud. i thought it would be realistic to include some characters in this that AREN'T desperate to play with the tiny person.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Wow, this is great so far. It's obviously a common scenario but I've never seen anyone cover it in such a realistic way. I like the pace you're taking with the story too, no need to rush anything - you describe the psychology and the interaction wonderfully.
Author's Response: thanks for the review! my goal with this one is to take my time heading in a general direction and just see what happens
Date: September 25 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Class Chat
I always eagerly await updates for this one, and you never cease to dissapoint.
Author's Response:
thanks man
Date: September 25 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Are you going to just show us his life going through school shrunk or are we going to get into jealousy with the popular chicks or something?? Im a big fan of all your previous work, and i have hope that this story will have as much humiliation and demoralization as the last ones :)
Author's Response:
all in good time, this will probably end up being a longer story, so there will be plenty of room for that stuff later
[Report This]Date: September 25 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Class Chat
Hmmmmmm! Art class, huh? I hope Pete isn't ordered to be a "life model."
Author's Response:
somehow, i think the administration would take issue with that ;)
[Report This]Date: September 18 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Bio Buddy
keep it up. i love how the story is progressing.
aaron
Author's Response:
will do :)
Date: September 18 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: Bio Buddy
This is getting really good. Looks like he's finally found someone who won't try and take advantage of him. Not that I'm expecting things to go smoothly from now on. I'm glad you're able to write as fast as you can, because that means less waiting for all your fans!
Author's Response:
yes; as you can probably infer, our hapless protagonist's "happy lull" won't be lasting terribly long ;)