Date: November 27 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: Gym Rats
And, I guess that homestretch begins with the very _next_ chapter! If so, you can count on me to read and review it like I did this brilliant one, right here.*
*Brilliant, because (thus far) you managed to refrain from the usual shrunken-boy-in-the-girls' locker room stereotypes. :-)
Author's Response:
besides of course having fun with the tale, my main goal here is to systematically destroy every giantess-at-school story stereotype there is. thanks for the review
Date: November 27 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 13: Gym Rats
I really like reading this story with the real life dialog an the attitude everyone has seem very life like. Well done. I just can't wait to see how his mom will react to his first day..
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
Date: October 16 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12: Hot Icebreaker
Wow im hanging from every even going on on peters first day and i wonder what will happen this year.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: September 22 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Hot Icebreaker
Aha! A reunion with She-who-is-my-second-suspect in the Great Pete-napping Caper.
Author's Response:
Hang onto those suspiciouns, the case is assuredly not closed yet.
Date: September 21 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 12: Hot Icebreaker
I like the oxymoron in the chapter title. It'll be interesting to see where this story goes. I assume you have a means to an end.
Author's Response:
I do indeed have a means to an end. Thanks for reading
Date: September 21 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: Hot Icebreaker
good addition. every time u update u get in a great ch. for this story. If this story was a book I would read it in a heartbeat! I like Sharon character hope to read more about her and her 2 friends. THX :)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: September 14 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
Well that was odd. I'm also wondering why the first line of each paragraph is indented. I don't mind. It just looks odd.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's just a formatting thing that happens when I post. It doesn't show up when I upload, so there's not much I can do about it.
Date: September 06 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
Very cool. I didn't realize new chapters of The Freshman were being produced.
Looks like you're taking this in a very different direction. Some mystery kidnapper who couldn't manage to abduct a bug size boy. A Darwin Award nominee type perhaps.
Ms. Tritter, what a treat!
Author's Response:
I'm still trying to discover the exact tone i want to take with this one, but i do have major plot points planned out, so i will continue to write chapters, albeit slowly. the mystery kidnapper wasn't necessarily trying to keep Peter, but simply put him in a dangerous place and force him to get out of it. obviously, more will be given on that later on. glad you liked ms. tritter
Date: September 06 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
Very cool. I didn't realize new chapters of The Freshman were being produced.
Looks like you're taking this in a very different direction. Some mystery kidnapper who couldn't manage to abduct a bug size boy. A Darwin Award nominee type perhaps.
Ms. Tritter, what a treat!
Date: September 05 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
Great update an wonderfully written. I kept thinking things would go awry but never did. Well done, I like this teacher.
aaron
Author's Response:
sometimes it's nice when things go smoothly :)
Date: September 05 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
Well, I can understand Peter's feeling compelled to lie, flimsily or not.
For one thing; even if he suspected the wackette from art class of being his abductor, he honestly didn't see her (trapped as he was, in the handkerchief). So, he couldn't publicly accuse her of his abduction with 100% certainty.
Then, there's the fact that his Mom would understandably freak out, and withdraw him from school. Completely and permanently! Her earlier fears having been seemingly justified.
Oops! I'm getting long-winded, again. So, I'll just conclude this review with my praise for a continuing good effort. And, my promise that I'll be here for the next riveting chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks, i appreciate the support
Date: September 04 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: Flimsy Alibi
a nice addition showing of a could be important character
Date: August 17 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
Just caught up, and this story iis still fabulous. It looks like Peter's troubles are far from over, but at least he has one person he can trust. Still, I have a feeling things are going to get a lot worse!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review sir. you are right, things are going to get a lot worse once the story really gets moving
Date: August 09 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
Cool; this story is back! The formatting is a little weird at present, but I assume that can be easily sorted.
Author's Response:
not quite sure what you mean, i guess; if i notice mistakes in formatting i will certainly correct it
Date: August 04 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
Well, wonder of wonders and miracle of miracles! You've finally graced us with a new chapter. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! It's a relief to know you didn't just give up on this story, like so many other authors have done.* :-D
*And, sadly? It's gotten to the point where permanently unfinished stories have become the rule, here, rather than the exception. :-(
Author's Response:
i always am disappointed when i begin reading a story on here, only to see it abandoned permanently, so i try not to do that myself
Date: August 03 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
Glad to see this story again thanks for posting. Forgot what happened an who was who, so I had to reread it lol. But this chapter was beautifully written an I wonder what will happen if his sister finds out, or will Lena just let it slip what happened?
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks for the review; as the chapters have been spread out pretty far, i will try to have mini reminders mid-chapter so readers won't forget past events and get lost
Date: August 03 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
Ahh the new chapter was exciting! Im glad you went back to this, defiantely one of my favorite stories from you!
Author's Response:
glad you liked it
Date: August 03 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision
so glad you continued this story, thank you so much! i really enjoy your writing!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: July 14 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 9: Lunch Encounter
Very interesting story. I would love to see more. Seems like it will be long given the fact that only a few hours have passed in the first nine chapters.
Author's Response:
I do indeed plan on making it a long story
Date: May 15 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 9: Lunch Encounter
Good. When is the next one.