[Report This]Date: March 03 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16: Shadow School
Great dream sequence, one can only hope that dreams come true!
Author's Response:
we'll have to wait and see, won't we?
Date: March 03 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 16: Shadow School
What an odd dream. I'm sure he won't be treated like that in school. Peter will be alright won't he?
Author's Response:
hopefully, yes, haha. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: March 03 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16: Shadow School
Hell of a dream sequestration you had going there! I wish that he could have dreampt just a little, bit, longer,....
Great stuff, but is Peter's reallity worse then his nightmare's?
Author's Response:
probably a very debatable question there. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: January 03 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15: Home Report
A sound strategy you adopted for this chapter. Both sets of emotions were plausibly rendered. Which makes me await the next chapter, all the more!
:-)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing! always appreciate hearing your thoughts on this story
Date: January 03 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
loved it and i am loving this story all together u know when i logged in today i looked through my favourites list and found this one updated and i pretty much screemed cos i love it so much!
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing! i'm certainly glad it brings so much joy, and I hope you enjoy the upcoming installments as well.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15: Home Report
looking forward to the next adventure.
The kiss was interesting in this chapter. The carelessness and disreagard by his biggest advocate. Then him not wanting to wipe it off. A giant could never truly understand the life of a tiny. :)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading! kisses are always unique to write about in gts stories and i try to have fun with them.
Date: December 29 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I like this premise and characters. This would be amazing with some vore in it! xD
Author's Response:
i'm glad you're enjoying it. i'm sure vore would present an interesting chapter, but then again, with only one tiny character in the story, it would also bring a swift end to the tale ;)
Date: December 29 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 15: Home Report
Good story, really liking it! I am wondering when you're going to update "Julia" though.
Author's Response:
i've been a bit busier than i expected so progress is slow on Julia but that will more than likely be the next update I post. thanks for reading!
Date: December 29 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 15: Home Report
A welcome addition. I suspect the next day at school will be even more heptic than the last.
Author's Response:
it will indeed be ramped up after day 1. thanks for reading/reviewing
[Report This]Date: December 15 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
Interesting chapter. Wonder if Lisa will be shunned from Sharon and her click the rest of the story... Or will they befriend her. Can't wait to see how his mom reacts to his first day.
aaron
ps not that Sharon plus two was being rude but it's probably hard to except a less popular girl into their group... Hope that they all become friends though. Anyways great chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i can't comment upon where things will end up, but you can expect to see a few more clashes between Sharon and Lisa later on, and probably much less subtle
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
*tip toes back in*
Forgot to rate...
*tip toes back out*
Date: December 13 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
Very good job of giving the reader a feel for how his first day went for him, very real. I disagree with another review though, I don't think it's terribly important to have male students interact with him. I liken it to the superman phenomenon, nobody knows Clark Kent is Superman, you just except it!
Look forward to future installments.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing. my goal is to hopefully create an environment where extended male student contact is unnecessary, so we'll have to see how it develops
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
Hey Jack,
This is really good, I like the slow build-up, and the dependance that he has on his Giantess sister! This has the flavor of the old original movie,"The Incredable Shrinking Man", (Only he is already only 5" inches tall) If you've recalled the differance between the book, and the movie? The Babysitter comes and the shrinking man has to hide from her and he spys on her,......REMEMBER? (in the book, By: Mathason)
It just kind of made me remember that, I don't know why, though?
Excellent work!
*wildcatman*
Author's Response:
thanks much for the review. i haven't seen the film or read the book, so i'm afraid i can't comment on either, but from what you describe, that is the sort of understated vibe I'm going for
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
Well, it could be worse! The students could have been playing Dodge Ball in groups of five. Of course, in Peter's case, he probably wouldn't have been able to do much more than look on in horror as the Terrible Trio made Lisa their target!
Author's Response:
yes, Peter's the type of person for which a game of dodgeball becomes akin to a game of chicken during an avalanche
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
I didn't expect u to do every school day that would be crazy lol. This story holds alot of promise but I would love to see how is new "friends" treat him?
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! and you are probably right to put quotations around the word friends
[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
*reads more new Julia*
*replys to this well done chapter*
*goes to bed*
Date: December 13 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sides Meet
I didn't think you'd go through the whole of more than one school day. Would be time extremely consuming. Hopefully if Peter has school friends over that will lessen his mother's concerns, then again it might have the opposite effect. I can certainly envision one of the people from school falling in love with him, or maybe it'll be lust rather than true love. More squabbles over Peter will ensue, I'm sure of it.
Date: December 11 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 13: Gym Rats
Oh my god best story! though i would like to know why he has no guy friends it just seems like the girls are hogging him i think it would be nice to have some good bro time, also tho i really want him and that red head to be like best friends maybe even date!! just saying! please update soon! i'm adicted now!!!!
thanks for your kind remarks. i'm aware that it's a tad odd that he has no guy friends here, as it's kind of a tricky line to walk in these types of stories when you bring in male giants without it being insinuated in some kind of fetish context, so i'm currently trying to find logical narrative reasons around it. i intend to update sooner rather than later
Author's Response:
Date: November 29 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13: Gym Rats
love this story. Too tired and sick to say anything meaningful.
Date: November 27 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 13: Gym Rats
Wow, a gym teacher that smokes? Really? You'd think she knows better.
Author's Response:
it would certainly make sense wouldn't it