Date: April 13 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Maybe he was so enthusiastic about a new chapter that Iswear12 tore right through it!
;-)
Author's Response:
Apparently!
Date: April 13 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Somebody's been watching south park
Author's Response:
I actually hadn't seen South Park until after I was about halfway through this story, and by then I already had a grumpy uncaring teacher named Mr. Garrison written in...
Date: April 12 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
I had no problems with the chapter, but it felt pretty short
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Don't know what to tell ya about the length, though. It's 2000+ words.
Date: April 12 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
@chocolatecheese1... Yes chocolatecheese, God forbid a giantess story to have an actual plot to it or......oh my god.....character development!
Man if reading this story sucks for you. I guess reading a complicated and well meshed NOVEL like The Titan Empire books must absolutly kill you..
Unlike you I come to this website for it's entertainment value. Everything else comes second....but if u hate this story soooo much then stop reading it, and search for something that will gets ur blood pumping to the places you want it to pump to.
I understand that this is not what you want. But there are two types of people on this site, the kind that want quote "the good parts" right away, and the kind that actually want a plot. A story's content is entirely decided on which type an author is. If he deems something is neccessary than he will write it and post it here. Whatever he writes is necessary for the world he wants to create.
So don't call his work unnecessary.
Have a good life and hope you find a story more fitting to your taste.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the defense of plot-focused stories. I guess he left to go find one more like what he's looking for.
Date: April 11 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
@ChocolateCheese1, you don't like it, there are an exceptional amount of stories on this site that cater to your desired action.
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure he showed up to the wrong party here.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Nice chapter as usual :) I'm really worried about Lisa now! Has Sharon and her evil friends said something to her about Peter? Or is is something else entirely? You've filled my head with questions! (Hope you can answer them soon ;) )
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will certainly try to answer them soon. Probably within the next couple weeks.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Really well written as always Jack!
Especially hoping for a continuation of "Persuasive Sparring" With Ms.Watson. That was leading somewhere for sure ;)
*Repost* forgot to rate
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I assume you meant Tightly Wound, not Persuasive Sparring? You're right that we haven't heard the last of Ms. Watson's ramblings on that subject.
Date: April 11 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
ps: I miswroted my last post. I meant to wrote i'm sure that Sharon has something to do with LISA's strange attitude.
Author's Response:
I gotcha.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Either Sharon somehow got to Lisa, before class (that is, intimidated/threatened her). Or, Lisa was misguidedly pre-occupied with a love note for Peter.
Author's Response:
I'd probably give people some sweetness-induced cavities if I used that second one.
Date: April 11 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
sure that Sharon has something to do with strange attitude! Beside I have a more general question, by browsing your favourite stories, I saw your preference about stories with siblings (sister-brother ). Is there a specific reason?
Author's Response:
There's a couple reasons. The characters being related just adds another uncomfortable twist to an already interesting power struggle - they tend to know more about each other than just strangers, and would be more likely to take advantage of it than a lover. It's also a harder relationship to write in this genre, so when people do it well I tend to favorite it.
Date: April 11 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Well, that certainly was a nice demonstration of the coercive power of a silver monopoly. Looks like someone's had a quiet word with Lisa.
Author's Response:
Looks like that indeed...
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
I wonder what's wrong with Lisa? Has a family member of hers died or something? Also, I don't know why but I'm starting to like Sharon a bit. I think she has iffy intentions but I kinda feel like deep down, she's not so bad once you get to really know her... I don't know why I got that impression from her this chapter despite her little games, maybe I'm wrong though.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Anything's possible! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Nice work so far, man! The personalities you've created are unique and consistent. The evolving relationship between Lisa and Peter is fun to read and keeps me coming back for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: February 26 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Progress, it's slow, and barely visible in this story, but something's finally happening other then bullies and class.
Author's Response:
It is indeed
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Ha Suzanne was grasping at everything she could. Thank you Erica for fixing the problem.
What a lovely awesome chapter.
Date: February 25 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Erica playing savior of situation! I bet Peter regret to not telling her about incidents at school.
Author's Response:
She is indeed. Regret or not, he's already lied, so now he'll just have to deal with whatever that brings.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
I guess that all Suzanne can do, at this point, is hope that her son's acting ability stinks. ;-)
Author's Response:
That is literally the last hope here.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Erica's icy demeanor is starting to crack a bit. I bet if Jessica were in the room during this conversation, she wouldn't have let her mom use her as an excuse. She probably would have offered to quit her dance classes.
Author's Response:
Her demeanor is indeed cracking. And that's probably an accurate guess about Jessica.
Date: February 22 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Hello!
It´s me again.
Soy consiente de que en mi último comentario argumente que soy de los que lee la historia una vez que esta ha finalizado. Pero también recuerdo haber escrito que leo todos los comentarios que dejas al pie de cada capítulo. Así que cuando lo leí termine posando los ojos en los ultimos 4 parrafos. Los leí, casi de forma instintiva e involuntaria, y que Peter tenga una conversación con su sobreproctetora madre, y basandome en el capíulo de Sra. Watson, solo me ha hecho preguntarme algo ¿Deberia entusiasmarme más de lo que hago con cada actualización? ¿Sera Peter evoque las incinuaciones de la Sra. Watson?
Si mi comentario te ofendio de algun modo, de antemano te ofresco una disculpa.
Sin nada más que agregar, me despido.
Bye :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting again. I don't want to reveal the story's future content yet, but I can say Watson wants something from Peter, and may soon find a way to ensure she gets it.
Date: February 22 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I forgot to mention in my last comment- will Peter ever make friends with another boy? It seems a little strange that he's only been approached by girls, even though the school is obviously co-ed. I know this is on a site specifically for F/m but still... Also, does Peter have a father present, or are they divorced?
Author's Response:
There will be at least one male character appearing in a future chapter for Peter to contend with. He has a greater ease making friends with girls, as he's just been more exposed to them in his life because of his sisters and their friends, but it is something I plan to bring up. Peter's father is not present, and that too will be addressed at a later point.