Date: September 16 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek
I kinda figured things would end up like this. Peter's mom is gonna go momma bear on this kid if she finds out what she's been doing to her son!
Author's Response:
Yeahhh it's not gonna be good.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek
With Peter's luck, he'll pass out while he's in there. And Stella will make up some b.s. about his going to his dollhouse bathroom (or wherever) to wash off the preliminary foot-stink. Which Jessie will no doubt be willing enough to believe. So guess who winds up spending the one whole week until next dance class with Stella?
Of course, I could be wrong! But, at the risk of sounding immodest, that only happens once in a blue moon. And I've never heard of a blue moon two months in a row. ;-)
Author's Response:
Ha. Well, that's certainly an unpleasant fate. We'll see soon that Stella is much less subtle than you're guessing.
Date: September 16 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek
Stella's going to get a savage beating from Jessica. And then from Erica. And then from their mother.
Author's Response:
It definitely won't be pretty, whatever it is.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 40: Truth Sucks
Ah, yes! The real game is now a-foot!
Author's Response:
Somehow I knew you'd find a way to work that one in, either here or the next chapter.
Date: September 12 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 40: Truth Sucks
Pretty good chapter. I wonder if Stella is gonna get some kind of sick pleasure from making Peter sniff her sock or if it's just a little childish game to her? Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Given how she's acting, it's entirely likely to be either option. Though neither is good for Peter. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 08 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals
Hoo boy, here we go again, hopefully Jessica will take his side in all this and not play along with her friends ideas if they might harm Peter.
Author's Response:
Peter can only hope.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals
"...I've got some ideas for where to start. Like, maybe, stuffing your little friend down the neck line of my practice leotard?"
Oh, my! Did I type that last part out loud?
Author's Response:
That might very well be what was going through her head at that moment.
Date: September 08 2015 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals
Fucking cliffhangers these days. But, I did love the chapter.
Author's Response:
Hehe I know I'm mean. There will be more soon.
Date: September 08 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals
Lollipop, lollipop, oh lolli-lollipop!
Author's Response:
Peter may not find it so musical, though.
Date: September 08 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 39: Sleepover Pals
I guess Stella dont believe in the proverb saying 'friends of my friends are my friends' hehe but I guess peter will be more friend with Stella's tongue :P
Author's Response:
Ha. That's definitely a possibility.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 38: Tongue Held
Couldn't he have just said: "A true gentleman doesn't kiss and tell?"
Author's Response:
Jessica would probably not have accepted that in the slightest.
Date: September 04 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 38: Tongue Held
Woah! Awesome chapter, maybe Jessica has some hidden desires! ;)
Author's Response:
It's possible, though it's probably not something that would be explored in this story - I'm trying to keep things (relatively) clean.
Date: September 04 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 38: Tongue Held
Aww, this was a cute chapter for sure! Erica and Peter seem to have a good relationship too but Jessica and Peter's is a lot more playful it seems!
Author's Response:
Definitely accurate.
Date: September 04 2015 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 38: Tongue Held
really cute chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 29 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 37: Tension Mounted
If Peter's not gonna clue Lisa in to the Menace of Mandy, maybe Lisa can get a word with Alita. Hopefully after Alita has to frisk Mandy to rescue Peter.
Author's Response:
It's a possibility. We may indeed see Alita having to step in again later on.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 37: Tension Mounted
I loved that cliff-hanger! Reminded me of a certain episode of a certain family drama on the WB, where the youngest kid stood up to the class bully. But, he didn't come away completely unscathed. So, the mother sighs and says:
"Did he at least give as good he got?"
And, the over-exuberant BFF replies:
"Oh, yeah! He beat the sh...uh, I mean; yes' ma'am! He surely did."
LOL!
Author's Response:
Peter's probably not quite in a position to give as good as he gets, at least physically.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Yes! Mandy! Been waiting for her. Don't know what shes going to do though, Lisa is like the Terminator the way shes protecting Peter. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned!
Author's Response:
Mandy won't be doing anything to Peter as long as Lisa is around, but that doesn't mean she can't still stir up some trouble.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 36: Cinematic Sightseeing
Yes. I've been waiting for more Mandy. Hopefully she causes some trouble.
Author's Response:
Whenever Mandy's around for long enough to start a conversation, issues are bound to ensue.
Date: August 25 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 36: Cinematic Sightseeing
Uh Oh, I guess Peter's good luck has run out!
Author's Response:
As it tends to do from time to time.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 36: Cinematic Sightseeing
Next chapter: how do you give a psychotic watercolor artist the "brush-off?"
;-)
Author's Response:
Maybe scare her off with a strong enough pun.