Reviews For The Freshman
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 43: Little Guardian

Aww, Peter really does have an amazingly loving family! Its rare to find a family of a tiny on this site that doesnt take advantage of the tinies size and truly loves them even a fraction of what Peters family does!



Author's Response:

Given the kinds of families I depict in my other stories, it seemed appropriate to give one tiny character a break.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 43: Little Guardian

Well I thought Peter would have be more disturrbed psychologilly by the incident but it turned out that this  is rest of family who are. And Will his mom allow him to go to School after after! 



Author's Response:

Peter's been through enough rough encounters in his life that he can recover relatively quickly.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

I hear you, Max. But, remember the old warning about wishes: "You might get it!"

It's already a no-brainer that Peter certainly will. ;-)

Author's Response:

He most definitely will.

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Fully agree with Maximus!



Author's Response:

Ha. There will be more!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Some of us love Stella, well, Adam X and myself anyway. Hope to see more of her.

 

Cary and Jimbob, this story has been a gentle giantess fans dream, Peter has barely endured anything! Let Jacksmith throw Adam and I a little action our way once in a while ;)



Author's Response:

It's definitely mainly a gentle story, but rest assured Peter will find himself in more sticky situations before it's over.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Yeah, I know, but I just think that so many other characters are more interesting, like Erica, Mandy, Sharon's Goons, Alita, Leah, Tritter, the unknown girl who (SPOILERS) kidnapped Peter in the clarinet, the mom, the play woman, the guy Peter met at the play, and like I said earlier, Sharon and Lisa.

Author's Response:

It just comes down to personal preference, I guess. I'm trying to give Peter a wide variety of personalities to contend with here. All those characters you mention will ultimately have much more real estate in the story than Stella.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

You know, sometimes it seems like I feel worse for the your sister characters than your actual protagonists (except Carly, of course). Always losing their friends because they turned out to be brother-tormenting lunatics.

Neat chapter as always.



Author's Response:

That's generous of you. Most of my sister characters have pretty spotty track records. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Some of us don't WANT him to suffer! It's more like we've cynically _resigned_ ourselves to seeing him suffer through the same old tropes. Not expecting certain authors to be refreshingly inventive...and, thereby, getting pleasantly surprised when they are!

Author's Response:

I'd like to think Peter's adventures can surprise from time to time.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Going by the reviews... man some of you people really want to see this poor kid suffer.



Author's Response:

I guess they do!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

*sigh* someone is always rescuing Peter, lol. My favorite 2 chapters so far. Now if we could only get Peter into the hands of Mandy and Stella by themselves, phew, that would be a party! Probably not a very fun party for Peter though.



Author's Response:

Yikes, both Mandy and Stella? Seems vindictive. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

I really loved the past couple chapters! Awesome work!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

I hope we can get back to the drama that was broken by these chapters. I'm sorry, Jacksmith, I usually think your works are great, but these last couple chapters didn't mesh well with the rest. Had this story taken place mostly in the school, with the home pieces being mainly plot oriented. I just got invested into Peter and Lisa and Sharon so much that this just doesn't feel... right. Then again, I hate kids, so maybe it's just me.

Author's Response:

Hmm. Well, it does need to be noted that this is a story with a lot of branching narrative threads - it's not just about Peter/Lisa/Sharon, and I like to give equal attention to all these aspects of the character's life.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Stella needs her own tinies, good stuff.



Author's Response:

Too bad for her that Peter's the only one in this world.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Well, it looks like there _was_ a second blue moon in a row (lol)!

Seriously, though: Stella will deserve it if Jessie goes "Superfly Snuka" on her. Because Peter was right. In legitimate childhood games, a double-dare is NOT punishment for failing a previously accepted dare. It's an attempt to provide further incentive for someone reluctant to accept such a dare on the first try.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Peter wasn't really in a position to stop her from distorting the rules of childhood games.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Ok ... even i am happy to see Peter rescued  I didn't get how. Stella lifted her foot to  see Peter trapped & mocked him. Peter called Jessica and Stella lowered her foot & touched ground. Then Jessica screamed and pushed Stella to save Peter??? 



Author's Response:

Yeah it sounds like you understood it.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety

Another aspect of what could happen to a teenager in a world of giants. This friendship is over. This is a good lesson for Peter to avoid young children, because they don't think about consequences.

 



Author's Response:

Yep, the friendship is definitely over. Peter already knows to be cautious around people younger than him, but he's never had a problem like this before in his own home, so it wasn't expected.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 42: Double Dare

Woah, any more and he would have been stepped on! Who knows if that would have killed him but it certainly could have broken something! Is Suzanne gonna find out? Im eager to see her go momma bear on Stella but I realize that would probably be bad for her. Honestly this is worse than anything thats happenef to him at school so far, even Sharon is starting to look like a saint in comparison!



Author's Response:

Jessica's definitely making enough noise at this point that Suzanne's going to find out. And yeah, Stella makes a few of Peter's school mates look nicer.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 26: Tightly Wound

What a clever way to sneak foot porn into a chapter where he doesn't like or touch the feet. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Ha. Thanks.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

Things are not going well for me, Even stella won't keep Peter as prisoner for 1 whole week, she would keep him for the night! Ps: I find Suzanne very sloppy here for not supervise teenagers especially with here 5-inch loved son. About backlash I bet on Erica & her mom as Jessica too "weak"mentally & physically. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be hard for Stella to get away with keeping him for a week. Suzanne may seem sloppy, but for years she's been letting her daughters' friends be around Peter and there haven't been major issues that necessitate her supervising them at all times.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

God bless you, Stella!



Author's Response:

I figured this would be your reaction.

You must login (register) to review.