[Report This]Date: November 12 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Loving the story, really hoping for some Mandy alone time. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks. There's enough story left that such a thing is very possible.
Date: November 09 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 45: Creative Differences
If I were the little guy I would watch out for Mandy in the future. I bet she is mad.
Loved 45,
Diesel
Author's Response:
She'll be back sooner rather than later.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 45: Creative Differences
Definitely think Mandy and Pete should have that basement date! Some alone time where they won't keep getting rudely interupted, lol.
Author's Response:
Mandy would probably be the only one having any fun.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 45: Creative Differences
That was great. I love it when Mandy causes problems. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next will be up soon.
Date: November 09 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
While Peter should be quite used to staring up at giant faces—the closest thing to an equal-sized face he's ever seen has been on a postage stamp—asserting his autonomy in the face (heh) of reckless indifference to or outright disdain for his welfare is still a skill in development. Good progress today.
Cary, I think the abduction hasn't been avoided so much as deferred. Sharon's been off-screen for so long that a master plan for simultaneously distracting all of Peter's (established) guardians is likely in the works.
Author's Response:
Slowly but surely he's making steps forward. And you're definitely right that Sharon hasn't simply cut herself out of Peter's life for good.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 45: Creative Differences
Pete now has a BGF (Best Guy Friend)? How refreshing! Especially, as it helps to circumvent yet another gts-cliche': the after-class abduction by scorned would-be girlfriend.
Author's Response:
That cliche was probably imminent if his BGF didn't show up.
Date: November 07 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Greatly looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: November 07 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 43: Little Guardian
Enjoyed Stella. I wonder if she will return? He has a few potential enemies now. What will his new home be?
Great stuff,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Stella may or may not be appearing again, but certainly his other antagonists will.
Date: November 04 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 18: Project Uncoupling
Chapter 18. Being put with the 3 ladies is scary. Amy plucking him and tapping her fingers shows her control. Well done.
Later,
Diesel
Date: November 04 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15: Home Report
By the way, I am enjoying the freshman very much. It is interesting and fun to read. Lots of different characters. I am about half way.
Excellent,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying.
[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Thank you for putting so much time in this story and all your other stories. The development of your characters is interesting. You describe everything in good rich detail.
Author's Response:
Sure. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Cute chapter! Peter had a lot of good fortune by going on that little date with Lisa, and then Peter had bad fortune with that whole Stella fiasco, and then good fortune again by having this little intimite moment with Lisa, following that trend, can we expect Peter to have some bad fortune next? Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Hehe. Sensing a pattern there? Can't spoil, but trouble is never too far away for someone like Peter.
Date: November 01 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
Big opportunity for both Peter and Lisa to mature a bit. Perhaps if Lisa sees how bad Suzanne (and Jessica) can get in the over-protectiveness mode, she'll realize how she can give Peter the space to feel confident. Deciding not to hide his misadventures from Lisa was also a learning moment for Peter. Not every friendly giantess has to be a surrogate Suzanne.
Still wondering about Peter's dad.
Author's Response:
You're right that Peter might've once hidden this from Lisa, but he's grown (ha) in his short time at school. Peter's dad will indeed be addressed at a later point in the story.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
HALLELUJAH!
You did it, Jacky boy! This chapter I could tell had more detail on every single thing. This chapter was just one interaction that focused on everything it can! Thank you, Jack.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Uh yep I sure did.
Date: November 01 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
And, in answer to your unspoken question, yes. I am putting Stella in the same league as Sharon, Kimmy, Amy, and Mandy.
Author's Response:
It actually took me a second to figure out who you meant by the fifth. Peter's probably lucky that the only the trio are aware of each other's existence as potential allies.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: Happy Aftermath
I don't what's going to be scarier for Pete. A family night with Lisa as guest of honor? Or an alliance of convenience between all five of his...well, maybe "enemies" is too strong a term. But, definitely hostile acquaintances!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 43: Little Guardian
That Paula Abdul song title, "One step Forward/Two Steps Back," is running through my mind for some reason.
Author's Response:
Probably running through Peter's head too.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 43: Little Guardian
I love this story so much, I wish you'd update it more often
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to update it again soon. I like to take my time with this one.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Excellent story. Very creative and well-written. Was also glad to see an update! Please keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 26 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Well, yet another chapter that I can't get into, but hopefully now we can get back to Lisa and Sharon and Mandy and all the stuff that makes this story good. And another date with Lisa? GREAT!
Jack, here's the thing: Lisa and Peter's relationship is the best thing about this story you've made here. These two are just charming and likable and I love reading about them, and Jessica just isn't as much of a likable character.
Author's Response:
Again, don't know what to tell ya; Lisa and Peter's relationship is a part of the story, but there are a lot of other narratives to service. This may not be a story for you.