[Report This]Date: December 18 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 58: Girl Troubles
In the immortal words of Snagglepuss:
"Zounds! He really should be more forthcoming. Fifth-coming, even!"
Author's Response:
Hopefully he takes those words to heart in the next chapter
Date: December 18 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 58: Girl Troubles
Thanks for the update! You're kiling us with the plot development time though! ;(
Author's Response:
There are some meatier developments coming very soon.
Date: December 14 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Gee, you really are taking your time for peter to open up about the loose ends at school
Author's Response:
I've been writing this story for five years and Peter's only three weeks into school. A slow burn is probably called for.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 57: Life Drawing
I seriously think Mandy is mentally unhinged at this point... I mean I had my doubts before the nude drawing, but now it's official. Poor Peter, having to go through all that! I think he needs to either tell someone *cough* Lisa *cough* about this or try to stand up to her a bit more, especially if she is planning to kidnap him (which I really really really hope she doesn't)! Great chapter as always, can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Some more on the innerworkings of Mandy's mind will be revealed in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 57: Life Drawing
I concur with Spooky Taco.
Author's Response:
So do I
[Report This]Date: December 13 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 57: Life Drawing
Mandy shows textbook early signs of sociopathy. Peter needs a restraining order on that girl. At the very least, his mom needs to implant a tracking device in him. She'll need it for when Mandy kidnaps him.
Author's Response:
I can't say you're wrong about her. Some upcoming chapters may continue to prove your theory.
Date: December 13 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 57: Life Drawing
Quick, someone make a Deviantart.com account for Mandy, then send the link to Sharon.
Author's Response:
Mandy is nothing if not deviant.
Date: December 11 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Gotta say that for those of us looking for caring interaction adventure stories that are ideologically engaging, you're really on the way to a gold standard
Author's Response:
I appreciate the compliment and your continued commentary
Date: December 09 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 56: Peter Envy
Sharon should be in AP Calculus, so finely has she derived the angles of faux concern necessary to manipulate anyone who tries to thwart her.
Author's Response:
She definitely has the skills integral to deriving whatever she wants.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 56: Peter Envy
Looks like Cold War II has just been declared.
Author's Response:
Too bad the Russians are about eighty feet tall in this case.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 55: Game Time
For that rejoinder, sir, I shall pun-ish you even more. ;-)
Author's Response:
Oh I'm looking forward to it
Date: December 08 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Really appreciate the update, wonder what the dirty scheme is, and how complicated the execution will be, wonder if Sharon has yet to form a plan or if you will clue us in on what's already in the works.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Sharon's playing the long game; without wanting to spoil, I will say she already has something in mind that we'll begin to see the early pieces for in the coming chapters.
Date: December 08 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Even being at school since several week, Peter's still lacking assurance in himself to talk back fimly to Sharon & co.
Author's Response:
Assurance is hard to come by at his size
Date: December 03 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
good funny chapter! idea trivial pursuit game is brillance.
PS: any hint for TO 7?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I unfortunately don't have any new information about TO7. I have written part of it but am not sure when I will be posting it.
Date: December 02 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This really is an unbelievable story, the best of yours. Please keep at it
Author's Response:
Thanks! I intend to.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 55: Game Time
Love this story. Glade your still updating it.
Author's Response:
Thanks much!
[Report This]Date: December 02 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 55: Game Time
A suitably nice interlude. :-)
Btw; I stopped playing Trivial Pursuit when I realized they were never going to include my favorite question...
"Who put the 'bop' in the 'bop-she-bop-she-bop?' "
Author's Response:
That one sounds worth excluding.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 55: Game Time
I really enjoy this story. Im glad youre still writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: December 01 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 55: Game Time
Great chapter, I am interested to see where things will go between Peter, Lisa, and Peter's family. Particularly, Jessica, she seems rather jealous and overprotective of Peter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Things may only be getting worse with Jessica.
Date: November 29 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This story is so terrific, I really hope you get time to write more on it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'll add more soon.