[Report This]Date: November 15 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape
Uh oh. A new twist in this epic adventure!
Date: November 15 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Any idea when this story will be completed becuase I keep checking back on the site everyday hoping there will be a few new chapters.
Author's Response:
no idea when it will be "completed" as this story is probably only around half through. i will post a new chapter eventually
Date: November 14 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Is there going to be another story in this series becuase I've really enjoyed reading them and think they're just great and I think that it would be a shame to drop the series until Jack manages to get back to normal size.
Author's Response:
it's unlikely that there'll be another one, but i do intend to tie up all the loose ends at the end of this story
[Report This]Date: November 02 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 12: Holiday in Sissy's Sock
Another great chapter as always. I've been dieing to see what happen to Jack in his present, Thanks. Well worth the wait.
Dave
[Report This]Date: November 01 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Holiday in Sissy's Sock
Great chapter! Well worth the wait. Another awesome job, man.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever
This was a great chapter. I love how you had Carly acting so sweet to Jack then have her put him through hell in his Christmas gift. Carly is really an amazing character. There are times in this series when I hated her and other times when I thought she was fantastic.
To me she is truly psychotic. But I find my self liking her very much. Thank you for such a great series of stories and thank you for writing such a fantastic character like Carly.
Dave
[Report This]Date: October 15 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever
I love stories that involve the character being trapped in footwear.
Date: October 15 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Beautifully writen chapter of a sister sharing the -joy- of christmas with her brother.
Author's Response:
'tis the season ;)
[Report This]Date: October 14 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever
Love it. This is the best story I've read in a long time.
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 14 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Dead on Arrival
Great chapter and worth the wait. I was wondering if you might have Carly somehow torturing or humiliating Jack while she with their parents. Obviously I don't think the parents would see or know about it, But I think it would really hurt Jack emotionally to be tortured or humiliated in some way with his parents close by. But with Jack unable to ask for help or even get their attention.
Dave
[Report This]Date: October 12 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 10: Dead on Arrival
been waiting for this! Here's to hoping she gets caught, so everyone can know she's how truly demented she is and Jack gets to confront her high and mighty monstrousness. haha. can't wait to see where you'll take it. This is one killer fucking story!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Dead on Arrival
Interesting cliffhanger, in just leaving him alone in her purse. I'm curious as to what happens next, but you havent failed to disappoint yet.
Date: October 06 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 9: Donut Hole
It's been awhile. Please don't forget about this story. Its part of my favorite series of stories on here.
Dave
Author's Response:
relax, it's been a week or so; be patient
Date: September 26 2011 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 9: Donut Hole
This story just keeps getting better and better. Please continue!
Date: September 25 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Vau at last a really wild chapter as we remember from the previous second part of this story. At the beggining of this 3th part i was afraid u just lost your breathe because of the moveout of the chapters but now i see that its again accelerate and im glad i can welcome our old jacksmith :). I hope there will be some more hell for him similar to this last chapter. I have some ideas of using him as a decoration to her clothes or shoes maybe we think the same way. so thank u for your great ability of writing and using your fantasy and hope your other story about our tiny student will turn to the hell soon to as u know what i mean :P. Good luck in writing mf!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. this one will certainly have some more intense chapters. the student story will be going at a slower pace, but that too will eventually have some crazier parts.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9: Donut Hole
What a great and strangely erotic chapter. I really loved this one.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks, this was probably the most fun yet of the story to write
[Report This]Date: September 24 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 9: Donut Hole
Jake just cant seem to catch a break. lol. Awesome as always. Keep up the great work and looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
hang in there, i'm in a generous mood and i feel like i ought to give him a little reprieve soon. thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: Stone Cold Burn
That was a very good chapter. The pain Jack felt wishing he could speak to his parents. Wow that really puts in perspective how cruel Carly has been to her brother.
I really love how nasty Carly is and all the physical and mental tortures she does to Jack. But now I want Jack to get some kind of help. He needs someone on his side.
Author's Response: hang on a couple more chapters, i plan on making jack's existence suck a little bit less
Date: September 16 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Wow... yeah... Carly is clearly not mentally sound. Five long years being held prisoner like this would just utterly break a person down to a souless shell of his or her former self. No contact with other family or friends is damaging enough, the torture on top of that... yeah, unbearable. Can't say I'm really sympathizing with her yet... maybe I will though if karma ever comes back and pays her back for doing all of this.
This story has definitely gone into extremes in some respects, which does... make it a bit iffy to me, but I'm still enjoying it. In fact, I've honestly enjoyed most of your stories on here; You're definitely one of my favorite authors~
I don't mind you being wordy either... I appreciate the vivid descriptions of everything... I'm actually pretty heavy on the words myself when I write. =p
So yeah, please keep up the great work. I'm very interested in seeing what's going to happen here. It's nothing short of amazing how Jack has even a shred of sanity left in himself after five years of this cruelty.
Author's Response:
thanks for the lengthier-than-average review, i appreciate it when commentators sum up several angles on their thoughts.
carly is difficult to sympathize with, although part of it is that i have so much fun writing her, i have trouble disliking her ;)
on the extremes, all i can say is that this is rated R and tagged with violent/sadistic for a reason, but i'm glad you continue to enjoy even if it's not your favorite.
Date: September 12 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 7: Prisoner of War
More please! I'm interested to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
haha well you probably know me by now; i'm sure this thing is going to go on far longer than i currently am anticipating