[Report This]Date: February 18 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
3 thoughts
1. Best series on the site.
2. Carly got what's coming toward her. I think we all believe this.
3. You write like a true author. I do indeed believe you've done lots of writing before gts stories. These are just side projects it almost seems like.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing; I'm glad you enjoy the series. I'm sure most people who went through this little fantasy trip along with Jack wanted Carly to go down hard. You are correct on the 3rd point; I love writing, and just sort of realized this is the clearest way I can express my ideas on the gts fantasy, so I do this for fun when I have the time.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
It's been fun reading through this series. The first two were great starters, showing how Carly and Jack grew their relationship of hate and malice toward each other. The trials Jack was put through were very nice and helped further explain Carly's feelings toward her 'big' brother. It was then nice to see how she developed 5 years later, and how Jack developed too over those long years of entrapment. While the ending was not the one i would have chose, it was still a satisfying ending to such a great series. But apparently your making a spin off, so i'll keep my eye out for that.
Author's Response:
thanks for the rating/review; it's always fun to hear new thoughts since this was finished quite a while ago. i'm glad you liked the progression of the characters. it is still the end of the main series, in that it's the last one that's going to follow the "Carly plays with Jack" format of the others, but there will indeed be a 5th one that shows new kinds of challenges arising after the 3rd story
Date: December 09 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Best. Ending. Ever. Of. All. Time.
Also, I would love to see what happens to Carly afterwards. I just would like to see some punishment given back to her after those 5 long years. It would be nice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There will eventually be another installment showing what comes next for these characters
Date: November 24 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins
Okay'this is not what i was expecting.... Brilliant as ever. You are a gifted writer! To bad that Sophie could not wait an hour.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words on this story. It's good to know people are still enjoying this tale long a while after it's been completed.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 29: Her Toy Forever
God, what a well written chapter. Absolutely brilliant. I love the psychology! Could it be ,, and they lived happily ever after?
Date: November 23 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 25: Jenny
Oh God, what a development!!! Absolutely incredible. Can i please swap places with that little lucky boy? You are one hell of a writer!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
There are a few things about this I didn't like.
Somethimes the description can be a bit too detailed, It was dragging on a bit. (I had to skip quite a few paragraphs in quite a few chapters)
I think five years was a bit too big a gap, I think anyone would'vr given up long before that.
I would've loved a bit of insertion (not including Sophie, that wasn't described enough for me) , especially by Jenny and especially in her ass.
All in all though, this was a top class story and I'd love to see more of it.
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. in response to the critiques:
I get what you mean about the description, that just happens to be one of my favorite parts of stories, so I use a lot of it.
He did kind of give up; it wasn't until about midway through the story where he decides to fight back again, but regardless I just wanted Carly to be an adult so readers were less uncomfortable.
I'm not really a big fan of insertion and don't think I could write it very well, so that's why there was just sort of a hint of it in there.
Date: May 23 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Cookies and Sweat
I LOVE this chapter Out of curiousity, in what chapter did he suck her sweat before this?
Author's Response:
in A Little Blackmail 2, he does something very similar in chapter 8
[Report This]Date: May 08 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Awesome!!!!!!!! Please put more with his cousinse and what happened to Carly.
Date: May 08 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Awesome!!!!!!!! Please put more with his cousinse and what happened to Carly.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2012 6:45 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Your stories are definitely the best it has to offer in years. Hope you'll continue with the Big Sister Diaries, and do write that spin-off or a sequel. where we see tiny Carly's life. But I do also hope you'll continue the story shifting to Jack and Sophie's relationship, that's something I want to see explored as well.
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories. the spin-off will indeed cover both of these aspects: carly's fate, and jack's further experiences with his cousins
Date: April 02 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Okay, I'm sure you're seeing this a thousand times already, but if you do do a spinoff, can Carly PLEASE be Chloe's pet? We never really got to see any of her perversions, and we're all dying to know.
So, think about it?
Author's Response:
we're sort of treading on tricky ground with chloe. even though it is just a story and i'm not necessarily sexualizing chloe herself, simply the GTS concept she's participating in, some people get kind of sensitive when kids get tossed into these stories in any way, so i need to be careful there. chloe will make another appearance in the spin-off, though, as will carly.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2012 12:07 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Great story. I am one of those who read every word of the series. It was a fantastic story. Yes I would like a story where we find out what happens to Carly. The story was full of twist and turns. I loved it. I am glad that Jack is ok. But I do admit that part of me wishes Carly won. Just imagine what she would do to him if he was a willing participant. Towards the end he loved her. She could make him do things to prove his love. Oh well thanks for a great story and series.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks for your consistent reviews on the series, they are appreciated. i'm glad you liked the conclusion. i get what you mean about the alternative ending, i wrestled with how to end it a bit, which is sort of silly to me since it is a fetish story we're talking about, but whatever, it was fun and i liked writing it. i look forward to hearing your thoughts in the future.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2012 1:34 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
I have never felt sick reading a macro story like I did during chapter 31. In a good way, of course - I've literally not once cared about the fate of a tiny person until I read your story. Masterfully written. I can't wait to read more of ALB4, and if you're interested at all in my opinion, I'd greatly enjoy reading a continuation of Carly's story. You do degredation the best of any macrophile out there today. So pat yourself on the back, this saga was worth it.
Author's Response:
thank you; i'm glad that i got you to care about the characters, that's one of the most important aspects of any type of story to me. ALB4 will periodically have updates, and you will hear a bit more about carly after the conclusion of this story in the spin-off story
Date: April 01 2012 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Very nice and I would love to read more especially about what became of Carly. Bravo good sir, bravo.
P.S. If you are doing more epilouges I still will push for at-least a peek back in Alison and Ash.
Author's Response:
someday, i will indeed do a check-up on the Family Reunion characters, although it probably won't be for a while. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: March 31 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Great story from start to finish, but I am curious what became of carly. I kept thinking something would be mentioned of her.
Author's Response:
you'll hear something of carly in the spin-off story
[Report This]Date: March 31 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
The ending was wonderful, I'm glad Jack finally got his moments of redemption against Carly for all the torment she put him through and Sophie who Jack desrcibed as Carly 2.0, turned out to be his savior. Although I am curious what became of Carly or how his family reacted to all of the events that happened in the epilogue. Amazing trilogy nonetheless. I'm curious to know which story you'll continue next.
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it. the spin-off story will reveal what became of carly and will show some of the family's reaction to these insane events.
Date: March 31 2012 7:16 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Brilliant story Jack. What happened to Carly though? Not like she can be sent off to prison. Maybe the nut house? Actually, that might not be a bad story idea! Think about how much trouble shed be in, stuck with a bunch of other looneys! However, I like Carly too much to witness her going through that torture, she might be my favorite character ever, damn I wanted her to win! lol. You definitely surprised me with this ending, your stories consists of mischievous cruel giantesses, I wasn't expecting a gentle ending. Definitely a testament to your writing abilities to make me give a damn about how it all played out. So many of these stories are read just for the juicy parts but you made people actually interested in the story itself. Well done.
Author's Response:
thank you; i couldn't ask for higher praise than to hear that you actually cared about the outcome of what is, in essence, a fetishistic porn story. really, i think it's just a lot of fun, and i'm glad you enjoyed it. you will probably hear about carly's ultimate fate in the spin-off story
Date: March 31 2012 6:21 PM Title: Epilogue: Six Months Later
Very nice and peaceful end. I've stopped reading them for fetish quite some time ago, I'm not that huge feet guy. But in the last months you did a great job keeping me interested simply in the further development of the story. I like it that you granted Jack some kind of "final rest" in the end.
I'd have liked to get some information on how the story went on for Carly though. Is she dead? I thought he just punched her unconscious..
I liked to read the Big Sister Diaries, it was cool to see some kind of contrast between how Carly feels about the whole situation, and what she actually tells Jack how she feels.
Lastly, I say that I'm totally in favor of your spin-off idea. Thanks for everything so far, and good luck :)
Author's Response:
he did indeed just punch carly unconscious; i'll probably end up addressing what happened to her more specifically in the eventual spin-off story. thanks for the review!
Date: March 31 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
What happene to carly?