Date: February 03 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Great I love gentle gts and great job on the story it is keeping me intrigued
Date: February 03 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Revenge Fantasy
Bravo! Well worth the wait.
I was so hoping for the beginnings of Carly's exposure. What an absolutely bizarre family. I eagerly await Jack and Sophie's plans and of course hope for the best for poor Jack.
Author's Response:
haha i'd say "bizarre" is an understatement... :P thanks for reading!
Date: February 01 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Revenge Fantasy
This is honestly my favorite work on this whole website and I've read just about all of it. I made an account just to tell you how excited I am to see where this story goes.
Author's Response:
thanks for doing that, i hope you enjoy what's to come
Date: February 01 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Revenge Fantasy
I'm not sure what to think here but I definitely curious.
Date: February 01 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Hahahah! I'm liking what Sophie is thinking. >;] Wouldn't mind seeing that happen to Carly for a change, and Karma is bound to strike sometime in her life! :P
Author's Response:
i'd say you're not the only one who wants to see something like that happen. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Man, you continue to impress me with this story. I mean, I wouldn't expect anyone to hold grudges after five years of thinking the person was dead, but his extreme pessimism is totally unstandable at this point.
I'm really interested to see where you take this. You've really sucked me into the story and got me sympathizing with Jack and wanting Carly to burn. Fortunately, unless he does something really stupid it looks like he is in good shape. Still have this strange sense of foreboding though. Hopefully he is too well trained by now to do anything even the slightest bit offensive :)
Author's Response:
glad you like it. i wouldn't ignore that feeling of foreboding, though ;)
Date: January 31 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
But wait! You've taught us to believe there is no hope for him in this world! What's going to happen? Oh man!
Good stuff. Really interesting mileage you're getting out of these characters. I 'unno. You've layered the stories well. It's a surprisingly textured world, it feels lived in by now, by these two strange people we've come to know pretty well. Now a third! (Ah geez, but who is this strange stranger? What doth this portend for weary Jack?)
Anyway, good writing. Got a lurker outta hiding, if that means anything. Keep on doing whatever it is you do, s'workin', and there are some embarrassingly rapt audience members out here.
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it enough to leave a comment, i always enjoy hearing other perspectives
[Report This]Date: January 31 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
After reading the most recent chapter. I hope Sophie does help Jack.
Dave
[Report This]Date: January 30 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I love this story. Glad to see you writing more chapters for it. I'm really hoping for a happy ending. Justice needs to be serve on Carly.
Date: January 30 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Ahhh, I've been anxious to see more of this one, glad you found time to write another chapter. Gotta say, I'm still rooting for some kind of salvation for poor Jack here, and maybe, JUST maybe... he's found it... that or a fate worse than his own sister. :p
[Report This]Date: January 30 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Great to see you adding to this third and final chapter. This could end up going a few ways--Carly has to remove her cousin from the scene because she is sympathetic to Jack, the cousin is like Carly and Jack is overdosed by female domination unto death, or the cousin starts out sympathetic but slowly comes around to Carly's point of view. Keep up the new-found momentum!
Author's Response:
with some glee, i point out your theories are incorrect! hopefully that means i've done a good job of keeping the ultimate end secret.
Date: January 30 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Honestly was not expecting that. Great story! Keep up the fantastic work!
Date: January 30 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Excellent suspensful build up for our tiny hero.
Do go on.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
This was a very exciting chapter. I really like the idea of bringing another person in to the situation. Maybe Carly and Sophie could double team Jack to hurt him or humiliate him. I think it would be fun to see just how much Sophie is like Carly.
Dave
[Report This]Date: January 28 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 14: Carly 2.0
your cliffhangers are what keep me reading. you always choose to end the chapter at just the right moment. Great chapter btw. You do an awesome job of keeping the suspence all throughout the chapter as well.
Date: January 28 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Awesome. I've been keeping up with this series for a while now. I have to admit, I wasn't as enthusiastic about looking into their past in "part 4". I see now, though, that is can be used as an excuse to keep the brother and sister together, whereas this story has an unknown future and can bring in Sophie.
It would be cool to see what a second person's reaction would be. I'm also curious about how our hero (victim?) would be able to mentally handle the idea that it's "happening again."
I remember the sister, in one chapter or another, saying how she wished he were smaller. How she would stuff him in her ear and have him feed her compliments all day. i don't know if it was random or a tease, but I think it would grow much more interesting if he were to shrink down more. Of course, I don't have any idea how it would be implemented, so I can only call it wishful thinking.
Regardless, I've enjoyed your writing and look forward to how the story progresses.
Date: January 20 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape
Excellent story! I keep reading with the hope that Jack can finally grow back to normal size and get some justice on Carly. Do hope that is something we can see in the future.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape
I wanna read more of this story =[
Date: November 16 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape
You've got me eating out of your hand here. You write amazingly well. This story is really incredible!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Great Escape
This was a very exciting chapter. I'm glad to read in one of your responses that the story is only about half done. I really think this is the best series on this website. I will be a little sad when it ends.
I really think you have a great charachter In Carly. There are times I find my self hating her. But then other chapters have me liking her. I do feel bad for Jack most of the time though.
Dave