Date: February 09 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
I love Carly as much as the next guy and this story but at this point your just fucking with the poor guy more than a lion does with a gazelle.
I still look forward to each update though.
Date: February 09 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Oh dear, Chloe got a little TOO attached there, didn't she? Makes me wonder how many goldfish she might've downed...lol.
And gee, how swell... it's freakin Carly again... Well, on the bright side, at least she saved him from being digested... but on the other hand, he's probably going to wish he was digested after the inevitable excruciating torture that's sure to come after this...
Although I'm hoping to see this story continue on with Sophie... I doubt she's just gonna stop looking.
Keep it up dude, it's been a nice long read so far.
Date: February 09 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 5: Paint the Town Blue
Oh my god. Sir, you have made me giddy with the notion of forced intoxication can be achieved from nail polish. Also the personification of his past, chaste girlfriend in Carly's toe and ensuing high jinks was greatly enjoyed. In a genre where our inspiration comes from the shoulders of giants, you are a collosus among them.
Date: February 08 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I like that you can tell the differences in personality between Chloe and Carly. And even know you'd never have Chloe kill Jack, I like that it has to be a real concern for him because she could simply get too carried away during one of her games or lash out in a fit of anger.
And also agree with another persons mentioning of the Freshman. Would love to see that picked up, if even for one final chapter, since you have said you are having difficulty finding inspiration, maybe just finish it off with a most unfortunate ending for Peter, it certainly didn't look good for him the way the last chapter ended. Just a thought.
Author's Response:
it's not that i've lost inspiration, i just enjoy being on the site less than i once did. i have a story arc planned in my head, and i do plan on actually writing it sometime, it just will be a bit longer before that happens. thanks for reading!
Date: February 08 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19: Your New Home
Another review from me.
It is nice to see that Chloe seems capable of actual genuine affection. Still a hellish situation, but one born more of the ignorance and immaturity of her character rather than the sociopathy Carly demonstrates. I think you did a good job of demonstrating the thought process of "I'm having fun, so he must be having fun too!" that someone that age would likely have.
In regards to "getting" the story, I admit that my continued interest in this series actually isn't from wanting to see Jack reunite with his parents or with someone who actually will treat him like a human being. Would I love to see it? Sure. But it's secondary to my actual interest: The hope that Carly will get what she deserves when all is said and done, and I can think of nothing more fitting for a person that's done what she's done and built up that little world around herself to find herself stripped of every single bit of that at the end.
Date: February 08 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I for one am thrilled you avoid the low road and stick with mouth/feet/etc. Your stories have always been classier and more sophisticated than the typical "AND THIN SHE STUK HIM IN HER NO NO ZONE LOLOL" stories.
Great work.
Date: February 08 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I love what you've done so far, but the market has been completely saturated with feet material. Can't you do something else? I mean, at some point Jack HAS to be inserted somewhere! Vagina, asshole, armpit, I don't care! Just something other than feet.
Author's Response:
the main reason i stick so heavily to feet and mouthplay, etc, is that in particular, vaginal, anal, and armpit insertion all those things that have a very negative effect on my ability to write these stories. i mean no disprespect to people who enjoy those genres, but to me they're kind of a gross-out, so i avoid them
Date: February 08 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
great work jack, i hoped chloe wouldnt recognized him and will torture and abuse him as his pet and i hope she will be as cruel as her sibling carly, anyway i dont understand other fans comments like dont be such cruel stay with sofie be more gentle, i think they dont understand the punch line of this story because in my opinion its about jakes poor fate and how can be cruel world around him maybe it deserves a happy ending but hope not just yet there can be plenty of years of torture and emotional abuse for jake from chloe (maybe from her mother too) so keep working and i hope u will get back also to your other story about shrunken student :)
also i have one idea in my head for quite a long time, there is no doubt you are one of the most tallented writers in this genre and there is one unfinished story called "family foot slave" on this site which is one of the most favorite at all im sure u ve already read it but its not complete becouse author said that he lost most of material so if you can think about lets called it free continuing of the strory because i can see u r very good and exited writing about foot thing and sibling torture so if you just would think about it, lots of fans would be crazy about it im sure :))
Jurdzi
Author's Response:
i appreciate you "getting" the point of the story as being almost entirely one of psychological/emotional torture for jack rather than the average kind of literary hero journey. that's my favorite part of the whole gts fetish, and as such it's what i both enjoy writing the most and feel i am best at. i'm not above trying out other genres, but i just stick mostly to what i find the most fun
it's an interesting idea i suppose about the other story. i have read a bit of it, but honestly i wasn't crazy about it, and besides, it's another author's work and i wouldn't dare touch it out of respect. you are correct, i do have a soft spot for feet and light, incest-suggesting themes, so even though i'm not going to just up and steal another author's story, you will probably see those ideas again in future stories i come up with
Date: February 07 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Haha, you'd think his spirit would be so thoroughly broken at this point that he would be almost psychologically immune to these 'games'. Especially without a mastermind like Carly crafting his torment, Chloe is like amateur hour in comparison, heh.
On the other hand, maybe the thought of his possible imminent rescue (?) makes it worse (?). Chloe might not be a suspect right now but I really doubt he will be hers for long with two other people looking for him. The real question is, who will find him first? :)
Author's Response:
i'd say you're correct on the immunity thing/ honestly, when i was writing it, it just came down to what made the chapter more fun to read and what didn't. i will say that your prediction/question is pretty accurate, as well ;)
[Report This]Date: February 07 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 19: Your New Home
definitely threw a changeup with our main character escaping carly. seems like he's going to relive the past 5 years only with chloe now. i wonder if there's any way that sophie will steal him back?
Author's Response:
for better or for worse in the case of jack's ultimate fate, the story (and series) is very soon going to start moving toward an eventual conclusion. thanks for your consistent reviews man
Date: February 06 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Really enjoy your stories, the whole Carly series is great. I love all the harsh treatment and hope you don't get swayed by all these reviews begging for gentle, stay the course, if gentle is where you intend to take the story then that's fine. Just remember, there are plenty of fans who love the mean Giantess personality! I'm actually torn, I'd love to see him go back to Carly but the idea of being in Chloes possession and going through all that again as she grows up is just so devilish. Plus, I think Jacks life is in greater jeopardy in Choles hands. Great stuff!
Author's Response:
glad you enjoy it. i try to cover a lot of bases so more readers will like the story, but in the end i most thoroughly enjoy non-violent humiliation scenarios, so naturally that's mostly what shows up in these stories. so, the harsh stuff will definitely stay, although there's a bit more gentle to come before the story ends. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: February 06 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18: When Giant Cousins Attack
I think the whole Chloe part is unnecessary. The guy has been through so much and I doubt that we need to compare Chloe to Carly. I hope that Sophie saves him soon, so she can help him get his revenge on Carly.
However, you always leave a great cliffhanger!! :)
Author's Response:
fair enough, you're entitled to your opinion. but really, this is a fetish story, the point in this case is to spread out the horribleness as much as possible, chloe is just meant to have a change of scenery
[Report This]Date: February 06 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I really hope Jack has a happy ending.
Date: February 06 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
First review. I've followed this series since you started it. The subject matter generally isn't my interest in the least (I much prefer gentle content, and the few times I've enjoyed...less than gentle content is when the victim has done something to deserve that kind of treatment), but your writing is good enough to make them worth a read regardless of that. That said:
I came into this chapter expecting Chloe to be generally unhelpful (though I was certainly hoping otherwise). While it did meet that expectation, I was also expecting/hoping Chloe to be less...malicious in her attitude. I "get" the pet thing, but she does seem to have Carly's mean streak in her, which is where I have issues. I was hoping Chloe would be nicer to more thoroughly showcase that there is something horribly wrong with Carly as a person, to the point where even a girl Chloe's age is more empathetic.
Naturally, I can only comment on events you've written so far and you may mean to go into this later. Just felt compelled to share my thoughts.
Author's Response:
thanks for sharing your thoughts. basically, the point of chloe being less than helpful was to have a kind of ironic contrast: jack was afraid of sophie at first because he remembered her being snobby years before, but she ended up helping him, and with chloe he had hope that her cute streak would mean she would help him out, which proved to be wrong. while i can't promise chloe is going to turn over a new leaf, i will say that in the coming chapters i attempt to highlight a bit more the differences between chloe and carly, and just why one or the other is better. and don't worry, there will be more "gentle" content later on
[Report This]Date: February 05 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 17: Rescued At Last?
Good chapter. I would have preferred Jack stayed with Sophie. But hey that's just me. I am really glad you are working on this story again. Its my favorite.
Dave
Author's Response:
patience, sophie is going to appear again soon
[Report This]Date: February 05 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Sorry, Im quite new here, this is supposed to be a chapter 17 review thing
Oh come on Jacksmith,
The guys been through enough, dont you think your starting to overmilk it?
It was perfect the way it was going, ah well
last time I didnt say it was chapter 17, didnt want to get you confused, sorry :)
Author's Response:
haha of course i'm overmilking it, that's supposed to be a lot of the appeal in the fetish part of it. patience, there's still enough chapters left that all is not lost
[Report This]Date: February 04 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I really like this third part of the series and that Jack finally found an ally. Although, things probably won't be smooth sailing, I hope Carly gets what's comming to her.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
"But fortunately, since he told Sophie about the shrinking formula, I just know that Carly's doomed."
Or Sophie ends up shrunk and Carly gets two pets.
Author's Response:
haha now you're starting to think like I do when I'm writing this stuff ;) better hope sophie paid attention in chem class...
[Report This]Date: February 04 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Still great so far. I had to slap my head at Jack's apparent willingness to leave Sophie's care. But fortunately, since he told Sophie about the shrinking formula, I just know that Carly's doomed. Knowing that is enough for now, haha.
Date: February 04 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 17: Rescued At Last?
Apparently god is also trapped un Carly's toes as his messages are not quite being received.
Excellent twist, you are fire lately.
Author's Response:
could very well be, considering how often carly is perfectly content trapping things underfoot. thanks for the review!