Okay why is everyone on the website so crule to the protaganists. they are supposed to over come the odds and topple evil not be defeated by an evil bitch who deserves to be shrunk

I'm anxiously awaiting whatever conclusion you have planned. The past several chapters have been great. I'm normally all for the emotional and eventualy physical destruction of the tiny characters in these sorts of stories. However, you've woven such a great, character-driven tale, that a small part of me hopes Jack wins and Carly goes down for the count.  But, that said, I could also see him giving him and accepting Carly as his owner and goddess for the rest of their lives.  I have visions of him crawling towards the space between her big and second toe, and shuddering out an odor-driven and humiliating orgasm that seals the deal, so to speak. Keep it up. I would also like to see you take a more sadistic mother/son foot-oriented story, somtime!

I can't but help think that Jack's going to give in soon...

Very interesting.  At first I thought Carly was just delusional, which she still might be, but I think she found the hole in his plan.  The trick is just to run out the clock.  Once there's not enough time left and she physically can't do what he wants in time, then she's committed, and he has to choose between

1) giving up the password and becoming her pet, and

2) not giving up at which point he becomes evidence and she actually has to get rid of him, forever.

3) there's no option 3 because it's too late :)  clever girl.

I still want to see where Sophie will fit in, after all that little detour has to be relevant again soon.

Yeah, I think now is the decisive time to see much fighting spirit left in him! :(

Fight for his freedom and don't give up on his humanity, even if this mean to die for this. Even if he has to commit suicide. Don't care about anything more, neither how much pain he will have to endure until the end come. Like a captive soldier being tortured in the hands of the enemy army, loyal to his country and preferring to die instead of giving informations. :D And taking Carly together with him.

Or give up on his humanity and give up this last hope of freedom (after Sophie and this video, he probably won't have another 'miracle' chance), going back to being Carly's pet.

Or... Carly could have a change of heart? VERY unlikely I must say lol She is a crazy, psychotic girl with a goddess complex. But seems to be so deeply dependent to his pet/brother *affections* by now. Could still remain some brother/sister love (a very disturbed one, almost incest depite her denying this) inside of her. I'm curious about how she would react before her dying brother/pet. Until now, everything she did she was so sure of herself that everything would work and go like she planned (like an almight always corret goddess), getting angry everything her brother (or subject) defied her. So she must be pretty sure in her mind... again... the he will simply give up and give her the password. But if he defy her again? And seeing him dying before her? She always was so 'protective' of him, making sure he wouldn't die and being as rough as she could without 'damaging' him too much, even when lending him to her friend. He meant her whole Goddess dream world. And if he die, this perfect world (which lasted five 'wonderful' years) would simply crumble before her eyes and she would be the 'old' Carly, just a normal popular girl like many others. :P Would she 'wake up' and see her brother as a person for the last time? I would say that Carly isn't much of a person as much as Jack isn't anymore, the more she turns him into a pet and takes his humanity, more she loses her humanity together with him. Jacks freedom (either by death or life), could mean the chance to save both humanity (at least for him). :)

Sorry for the long comment, I like to write what is on my mind about everything happening, pondering about things and creating crazy theories. :P

For someone that doesn't like the butt genre you did pretty good. I would have made Jack lick her ass as well as kiss it. But that's because I love the ass worshiping genre. But for someone who doesn't like it you did an excellent job on the chapter. Thanks for thinking of us butt lovers.

David

Even with her world about to crumble all around her, Carly is still the master manipulator. Glad to see Carly still has a few tricks up he sleeve. She's one of my all time fav characters. 

I liked it.

I expected her to be rather evil/bratty with him going in and you nailed it nicely. Though I am begining to wonder if even getting back to his family will be enough to ever -truly- get back to normal.

another excellent chapter.  please continue good sir

I have nothing but positive things to say about this story, and series in general. I almost wish it would never end, but then I would also like to read other stories from you as well. Oh well the fact of the matter is I am really really looking forward to how Jenny is going to play with Jack.