Date: August 19 2011 12:28 PM Title: Removed
Hey! You seem to like reviews, so I thought I'ld leave you one. I like the setting, and the dialogue is a higher standard than we typically get. If I were to recommend anything, I would not introduce any more characters, because I don't really know who everyone is.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Well, I only request reviews so I can tell if my story is being well received, that and I'm quite interested in catering it to the tastes of my audience.
As for the recommendation, I'll take it into consideration, but the reason I'm adding so many, is to create multiple rivalries within the group of fifty students. That way, I can lead up all the different aspects of the fetishes within different groups.
It will enable me to incorporate a lot more action, I'm just putting in the ground work. If you'd like, I could write up an alternate chapter that summarises all the different characters?
Thornton
Thanks for the review, any favourite characters?
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 9:16 AM Title: Removed
Let me guess: Alisha's daddy will pull a few strings to get fictional-Thornton's funding revoked unless his daughter gets to go on the trip, as well. Which, ironically, will only prove Thornton's diagnosis of her, as correct.
Author's Response:
I didn't even consider that... damn.
So, thank you, I'm now going to have to come up with something better. Or do a total Michael Bay on the whole thing and cover the plot inconsistencies with action packed amazingness.
Either way, the reader wins. ;)
And seriously, thank you for taking the time to read it. I'm very grateful.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 9:08 AM Title: Removed
I'm rubbing my palms together, in gleeful anticipation, already. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm quite speechless.
I hope that you'll like Eliza's character development, but Alisha is one to keep an eye on.
Ashley however... actually, you'll just have to wait and see. The fun begins on the plane.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 9:02 AM Title: Removed
I think that your counterpart is going to be eating some Corvus corvus before this story is finished. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 18 2011 8:57 AM Title: Removed
I can already tell that Eliza and Alisha are not the type who like being ignored for the so-called "Greater Good."
P.S.---welcome back, Thornsie! :-)
Author's Response:
Ah, now there's a familiar name. However, I'm afraid I'm going to disappoint you. I'm not Thorns. I was a member of the City forums back in 2006, but I only wrote stories that were somewhat 'Pure Fetish', the type that had no storyline. But action packed and fast paced.
Thank you for the review, I'm very grateful, I was beginning to think that nobody would like it. :)
Date: August 17 2011 7:50 PM Title: Removed
Roar! I'm back with a review for your story this time. Great start youv'e really set up the scene well and use great dialogue and description. I can't wait to see where the set up goes :P
I can also see how you like your butt crush to should help me ! *ninjas ideas* :P
Author's Response:
Quite funny how two of my favourite authors from this site have reviewed my story within 30 minutes of me posting it up. If Cayce gives a review, I'll be complete. ;)
Well if you'd like to PM me, I'd be happy to give you ideas or help you with your storyline in relation to butt crush. It's my favourite aspect of the fantasy. Yet, I'm writing for others here... so if you tell me what it is you like, I'll incorporate it into my story. I'm guessing foot domination, f/f? I intended to get that in here anyways. ;)
Looking forward to hearing your opinions in the chapters to come.
Thornton.
Date: August 17 2011 7:11 PM Title: Removed
thought i'd be one of the first to extend a friendly word. even though there's no giantess content yet, you seem to be the type of writer who doesn't forego description of the scene, the absence of which honestly kills some stories for me, so kudos. looking forward to seeing how you bring that element in once your main character's foes become decidedly larger compared to him.
Author's Response:
Christ, you're the author of Family Reunion. I have to say, I'm a huge fan of yours and hope that I can write a story that you too will enjoy. Thank you for the kind words. It's going to be at least 10 chapters. I'm halfway done on the second chapter. So it should be uploaded in the next day I would imagine. Sorry for lack of content, I need to build it up...
Thornton.