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Date: January 26 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: November 29 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: July 12 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like the story so far though there are a few things I noticed. In the first paragraph you mention the name Mikey before telling the reader that's Steve's (Steven's) nickname. Also, you sometimes forget to give the names of people capital letters. I also think it would be better if the chapters were separate rather than both within the same chapter.

Reviewer: amanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2009 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Alyssa please write some more chapters,this is a really nice story i am sure you have some naughty thoughts that you could add within the stories txt this would make it complete....really enjoyed it.

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