Reviews For A Mothers Decision
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Reviewer: Midora Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

please, write a sequel! 

Reviewer: Stone Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 25 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Where's the rest?
The last part I see is he's trying to resurface from the tub before drowning... That the end?

Reviewer: Stone Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 25 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Where's the rest?
The last part I see is he's trying to resurface from the tub before drowning... That the end?

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

not bad, but you give your characters zero time to develop, and they feel more like cliche cut-outs than characters.  i realize stories like these vs. actual literature have way more leniency room, but it's nice to at least have some reason for these characters to be acting like this before they go crazy on one another.  the pics are very nice, though.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a very good start.

Dave

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