Date: March 13 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
I'm sorry. I didn't like the ending at all. I spent the whole wondering how Amanda was going to save their marriage. In the end she's just a sadistic psycho bitch. Again I won't rate this story, since its out of my preferred genre.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you commenting, especially since this thing is so old. I'm surprised you gave it a look at all; from what I know of your preferences, I would've assumed you wouldn't touch it with a 10-foot pole.
Date: August 15 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
I liked the ending i thoght they would have been sent home but the blood and guts of it all suprised me, the story got better as it went on, well done again.
Author's Response:
glad i was able to surprise you. thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
oh thatwas effin sick man but i likee it alot, lol
Author's Response:
hehe thanks
Date: August 13 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
I think violence of this nature is approrpriate, but it has to be done just right to shock and arouse the reader. You did that here. I was just commenting that extreme violance shouldn't be the order of the day, or it becomes too routine. You do a good job of developing characters and narrating scenes of normality, as well as interplay between tinies and their "owners." I think everything clicked for this story. That said, I normally like to see close friends/relatives do stuff like this because it does come across as shocking to see a loved one evolve (or devolve, as it were) into a crule tormentress. So, this was pulled off fantastically, despite my own personaly likes! I once had an idea for a story thas was going to end with a mother or sister finishing their loved one off by scrunching their toes over them until they suffocated and became brain dead, but remained techinically "alive." The descriptions of the aftermath were going to be pretty intense, but I have ideas that I never get around to putting into story form. But, that's the kind of shocking stuff I like best! Good job, as always!
ok; thanks for clarifying
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: August 13 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
I enjoyed the story, despite being mainly a foot guy. While overt violence shouldn't be a primary tool that's used in stories, in my opinion, when done sparingly, it can pack a strong punch. This was viscerally brutal and definitely was surprising. I think brutial violence works best in endings when the characters were once close friends or related, somehow. I also like death scenes that either use a fist squeezing or toes slowly crushing/suffocating a person in stink, so this was nice to see. This was done really well. You did a good job of branching into uncharted waters for yourself as an author!
Author's Response:
thanks for the critique. i am a bit unclear on your some of your meaning, though, so just to make sure: are you saying there's too much violence in this story, or that it should only have been used between family members. or both? i just want to make sure i improve.
Date: August 07 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Accidentally Unfaithful
this is really good. I really wanna know how its gonna end
Author's Response:
thanks for the compliment; this will be a shorter tale, so you'll find out soon
Date: August 06 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
Great work on the new story, it's a little violent for my tastes though. Too each their own though. Hope you continue some of your others soon, they are quickly becoming my new fav's.
Author's Response: thanks. i only have 2 work-in-progress stories including this one, although if you mean the blackmail series, that'll definitely continue sometime
Date: August 06 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Accidentally Unfaithful
The treatment is going well :) I think Martha turn is up. I think we might want to test how comfortable she is with here sexuality... Is she a prude?... And there is nothing like a couple sexual therapy, forced confinement somewhere, perhaps.
And I imagine somehow those two will have to "pay" for the treatment... Maybe in kind?...
Story is coming alon splendid ! Thanks.
Date: August 04 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
This is an amazing story! I love the whole plot and initial idea, and it is taking a very interesting turn . I hope they both survive, even damaged... So there is hope in this treatment, maybe they'll refer an other couple ;). Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
thanks! and regardless of effectiveness, i'm pretty sure i'd want to kill anyone who recommended this treatment to me ;)
Date: August 01 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Easy Job
Once again an impressive story you are a very good with the plot well done.
Author's Response: thanks, i appreciate you supporting a couple of my stories like this
[Report This]Date: July 22 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
Hey man, I find your ecletic take on gts/size change really cool and interesting. I want to see you continue what you want to do, and not become discouraged. I realize that I flipped out once but for different reasons that some of the reviews here. Keep it up and writie what you like. I do enjoy going back and reading all of your foot scenes. I've been around this stuff a long time and have never enjoyed such descritptive scenes. If you ever get around to the Carly stuff again, can you give a glimpse as to what you have planned. And yes, this story is truly unique and should be enjoyed to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thanks for the support man. i will continue the Carly stories at some point, I just thought it might improve the quality of the 3rd story to take a break before diving back in
Date: July 20 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
You're right I'm probably missing the point but I guess I just thought it was unrealistic. Amanda is kept in character very well I must admit but I don't people would take marrage ocunseling to these sorts of levels.
At the moment I feel quite annoyed because someone has just commented asking why my story "A Day in the Life of Stephen" is so short so please excuse me if I get angry or anything. It's nearly 6300 words long. That's hardly short considering giantessworld standards!
Author's Response:
Well Amanda's not really a marriage counselor, she's just a crazy stalker with a one-track mind. It's a bit half-satirical anyway and is meant to sort of resemble a, like I said, over-the-top unrealistic thriller/horror flick like Saw. In the end, it's just a guilty pleasure to write, and me testing the waters of other genres.
I saw that review too; I guess some people just want novel length or something out of stories, I wouldn't think much of it.
Date: July 20 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Mouth Fishing
This is crazy and seems way over the top. Not sure I'll read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm not going to tell you what to read, but I think you're missing the point; Amanda is an unbalanced, psychotic control freak, her kind exterior is meant to hide her insanity. She's a woman who has a positive goal for the victims but utilizes violent methods to see it through. To make an odd reference, have you seen the Saw movies? It's sort of like that.
Date: July 20 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 2: Marital Trivia
Ok this is getting wierd. I didn't think Amanda would acutally hurt them.
Date: July 17 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Strange Surroundings
Well this is an odd concept. Seems very original. I hope the Jason and Martha get through alright.
Also, in the first line, is his surname really that important? Does it have any relevance to the story? I know you could potentially aruge that for one of my stories too but here it doesn't look as if it will ever be mentioned again whereas in my story it will.
Author's Response: I thought I should include it just in case, but you're probably right.